Ill give free VIP to the winner or $10US into a paypal account. Cool? Ill also do a mass mail out about it, I just need someone to give me the cut off date for sign ups.
lol does n e one remember that diss a member in a short 8 line rhyme thread back last year?
and you actually messed up the syllables in the rhyming multi and added an extra syllable to the set up.
Hoes-i've-played
Son-ya-Blade
as to your
Hoes-that-i've-played
Son-ya-blade
that's the exact same line minus the periods in the punchline, and the extra 'that' added in your set up.
periods are often added to create misdirection in text punchlines
it's all based on pronunciation, but to me this is a slant rhyme based off of my vocabulary. to others it may not rhyme at all, but the stresses are the same.
and there's no doubt that musically this would be off, as would the majority of text verses online.

i'm not participating cause i'm sorta with linx on it turning out a lil corny, only i don't have experience like he does. it'll be funny to read though.Ill give free VIP to the winner or $10US into a paypal account. Cool? Ill also do a mass mail out about it, I just need someone to give me the cut off date for sign ups.
Actually to keep it fair, Im not sure if this is done or not in other battles, but how about you provide each round with a beat to write to, so that both contestants uses the same bpm and bars are the same length? Might be an idea? Not trying to step on your toes, I just want this competition to be fair and respectable.
only problem is that if we do that, you can scratch everyone off the list sans you maybe, and i base that assumption on the sole fact that it's your suggestion. so that's a little ambitious. for the fuck of it, you can sign me up too. i'll participate. but you won't hear me rapping cause i don't do it and i never will. i'm not a vocalist, and generally i tend to dislike rap with a foreign accent or think of it as corny. with a few exceptions though of course. if anything, i should rap in norwegian.Lets just make it an audio tournament then.
only problem is that if we do that, you can scratch everyone off the list sans you maybe, and i base that assumption on the sole fact that it's your suggestion. so that's a little ambitious. for the fuck of it, you can sign me up too. i'll participate. but you won't hear me rapping cause i don't do it and i never will. i'm not a vocalist, and generally i tend to dislike rap with a foreign accent or think of it as corny. with a few exceptions though of course. if anything, i should rap in norwegian.