P.O.W. (Diaz-H and Kamikazi) - Right Now [Dame Grease Contest Entry]

[3en]

This actually impressed me ur lyrics a flow were dope!

keep it up

 

[Skillz]

Wsup mayne

Mayne, that was kinda hot. For real. At first, I wasn't feelin it but then it started gettin tighter as y'all came at it harder. Worked well wit tha beat n off each other. Keep it up. Even tho y'all sum bustas.

Peace
Skillz

 

[Saaphir]

"Who's the boss of this rap shit,I give you a fucking clue,it starts with a D..."

lol @ these white kids who think they're running this rap game!
Besides that,I must admit that the production is solid (did you make it?) and so is the flow.That's a good track,kidz!

 

[Dj Dant]

Read this article for information on the beat. I use a Behringer B-1 mic and this is my environment:

i thought my spot was a mess lol i have my artist record in a closet. poor mans booth

 

[2PacThug4Life]

I don't really like tha beat, but you 2 can bring tha heat. Both of you had great verses, but Diaz' verse was a little longer and a little bit better IMO. Keep doin what you do.

 

[DJ Harris]

had to check it out and im glad i did shitz crazy im definalty feelin it good job u guyz

 

[Diaz]

"Who's the boss of this rap shit,I give you a fucking clue,it starts with a D..."

I don't know how letters are pronounced in France, but he says P.

lol @ these white kids who think they're running this rap game!

It's called confidence. I'll take it over your pathetic "

For Those Who Care,Here Is My Mixtape" approach anyday.

Besides that,I must admit that the production is solid (did you make it?) and so is the flow.That's a good track,kidz!

Dame Grease made it, check the first post.

Thanks for all the feedback everyone.

 

[S. Fourteen]

Good job again. I like it.. I listened to it 3 times actually hehe

Keep doing your thing brother... you too KAMI.

 

[tHuG $TyLe]

Decent track, the switching up confused me at first coz yall sound the same lol.

Anyway yall can flow which is good, lyrics are decent, nothing super lyrical but decent.

Pronounce your words better though, especially the end rhymes.

 

[underdog]

its aight, sometimes hard to understand what your saying

 

[7 Syns]

The flows choppy, rhymes are average at best. Your delivery needs alot of work, it isn't clear what y'all are saying at times.

Practice some more.

peace.

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beats pretty nice yeah...but aint no use commenting on that. Like I said quality soundsa a bit harsh, could be clashing w/ the frequency levels in the beat, could be ur mic...dunno. Flows were both pretty solid, but I noticed a lot of problems with breathe control and even more problems with the pronounciation. Could barely understand half the shit U were saying - again that could be mixing though, vocals sound pretty low. Yeah 2nd dude was a bit better on the breathe control part - 1st dude was tryna put more words in them bars...prolly why the pronounciation was a bit fucked 2. Hooks pretty nice. Overall its decent, but yall still got a lot of work to do on the finer aspects of spitting. Keep it up.

pz

 

[Shot 21]

How do you get so many people leaving feedback? Whats your secret? Cuz I really wanna know!

 

[Diaz]

How do you get so many people leaving feedback? Whats your secret? Cuz I really wanna know!

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[Exodus]

thats a damn hot track, i'm keeping it. both of ya got some tight lyrics and flow

 

[Think_ThuGLiFE]

if we put Jossey on this .. it will be a HIT

lol Jk

pretty decent i wasnt expecting anything like this from u 2 kids. GJ for 16 yr olds... Work on breath control and maybe try layering ur vocals.

The end of the song makes me laugh 2.

keep postin sum new shyt

 

[-=ThuG4LifE=-]

How do you get so many people leaving feedback? Whats your secret? Cuz I really wanna know!

because they r alien rapperz!:thumb:

track is not bad
alien-rap rulz

 

[imported_Big_R]

Good track, I like it, quality could be better, but you used what you could I guess

 

[Helena]

my babies are soo talented!
i loved this, keep doin ur thing guys, u'll go far!

 

[yak pac fatal]

not bad, nice flow