P.O.W. (Diaz-H and Kamikazi) - Right Now [Dame Grease Contest Entry]

Flipmo

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#42
well, i have to admit you guys sounds like you put alot of heart into it. Diaz your flow is a tad better than your bros, but not saying he sucks or anything. You guys also have voices to make it big in commercial rap. So I'd say you guys can make it if you keep on working hard, the fact your bros also gives a certain appeal I think. Also both very energetic, which I enjoy.
 
#43
yeah, that is some good shit....it almost makes me wanna make a rap...almost...cuz i know i'd murder anyone that came at me....get shot down by a 16 year old...wont look good on your resume...
 
#45
Shit was dope, i liked your guys flows and you had nice energy on the track. But you need to take the marbles out of your mouth and enunciate properly.
 

Freedom Froggy

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#46
you guys sound like a couple of pussy indiana boys.. looking for a negro like me to give you credibility in the hood


WELL IT AINT GONE HAPPEN!


BUT .. I like the way u guys flow... which one of u fucks did i say sounded like shyheim.. cuz u do... but keep up the good work... i will be lookin for ur 1st album "on the grind hustling corn"
 
#49
Sounds cool kinda like a Naughty By Nature type old school flow on 1st verse.Only thing is the quality on vocals,my opinion drop it with a top notch mic and you got something going! Dj King Assassin!
 
#50
Decent
Not a fan of this type of production but wasn’t too bad.
The vocals were good, I think y’all can work on your delivery and pronunciation a bit more and you’re off 2 a good start. Catchy hooks are always a plus if your looking for some mass appeal. Good job fellaz.
Keep it up!
 
#51
lol, it was hard to tell the different between you guys.

like lm45z said, production isn't something I would like to bump, there are times where i can barely understand you (mumbling), other than that i think this track was pretty well done. 8/10
 

Sebastian

Well-Known Member
#52
ok, i definitely like the track.

besides the beat (which i like) i think your voices and the flow are good too.

from my point of view, as other members have already said, you should work on your pronounciation.
 

AmerikazMost

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#53
hot damn...good shit guys

i hope one day that i'll be saying, "i listened to these kids when they were still wetting the bed"


enunciate more, but hot beat, good rhymes, good presence
 

Chronic

Well-Known Member
#58
Diaz said:
I don't know how letters are pronounced in France, but he says P.
lmao.

Flows are kinda off on some parts but for the most part they're good. Lyrics were alright. Cool track, keep at it.
*insert comment about sound quality of the track even though you mentioned it in your first post*
 

Shot 21

Active Member
#59
Aight then bro:

Nice voice. Lyrics are pretty good. Pronounciation is pretty poor but them lyrics are amazing for your age. Advanced! Flow fucks up on a few parts. The first verse verse is better than the second. Its just the quality of the mic and pronounciation that need working on.

Now tell me your secret! PM me if you want.
 

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