P.O.W. (Diaz-H and Kamikazi) - Right Now [Dame Grease Contest Entry]

2Pax

Well-Known Member
#65
Professional sounding production, the beat is nice. The hook is hella cathcy. I would say average lyrics but then again you guys are what, 16 years old? Impressive. The flow is solid for the majority of the track but there are some minor areas of inconsistency. And as numerous other people have said it's hard to work out what you guys are saying at some points but this could be down to the quality of the Mic you guys use.

Overall, very nice track. Keep up the good work. Would like to hear more from you guys. :thumb:
 
#66
Diaz - Flow-wise, you ride the beat nice. At times the level of your voice goes off. Lyrics are nice. At times it's hard to understand you but that could be just cause you are an inbred fucktard from wyoming.

Kamikazi - inverse of diaz. you are clear and easy to understand, but you go off beat at times. the inbred fucktard comment still applies to you as well though. And just to make this a competition, your lyrics come better.

Overall / General comments:
- excellent for 16 year olds
- Production is hot
- Content gets kinda lame
- Good mixing
- Chorus is all right
- Fuck you
 

G.Litt

U Hate Me? I Care!
#67
I dont agree with you on the inbred stuff, and I feel that is kind of a low blow... I wish I could take back the rep I gave you by mistake.
 

Preach

Well-Known Member
#71
ToopackShaker said:
- Good mixing
i beg to differ

no offense to you guys cause i liked the track. i don't take the format quality into account when i make up an opinion about a song or whatever, so the song is pretty cool. but the mixing is bad man. i hear frequencies clashing, i hear distortion, it's awful. it's like a musical massacre. okay it's not that bad, but i'd like to mix this together for you ;p
 
#72
Rizzle said:
i beg to differ

no offense to you guys cause i liked the track. i don't take the format quality into account when i make up an opinion about a song or whatever, so the song is pretty cool. but the mixing is bad man. i hear frequencies clashing, i hear distortion, it's awful. it's like a musical massacre. okay it's not that bad, but i'd like to mix this together for you ;p
Oh yeah? You know, I believe I was gonna send it to you to mix, BUT YOU WEREN'T ON.


Umm, so are you here to stay now?


BTW, that reverse beat was tight, send plx.
 

EDouble

Will suck off black men for a dime
#74
Liked this track!I got sent it earlier & i ended up liking this trak. good work. only shit i said i think is up is the not understandin parts the vocals and quality i think flows good i think work o n all that and when get deeper voice good it all good it said it was like Right On i said right off bat that we was gonna be doin the same thing thug didn't know at the time what we had goin but i'm a don i hope to see more traks like these in future also u know i felt the things the ones on themysapce page also good work ioh and props to the dj rizzzle for beats from u they r good also i would like to say a debt of gratitude to the tax officer whos gonna fuck over everythin and also the man int he cape who preteneded to be a teacher i hope to see all of u there. KAMI u had a good verse too stay strong brotha.

OPrisonerrs of waaarrr! Hehe. I'm Out.
 

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