P.O.W. (Diaz-H and Kamikazi) - Right Now [Dame Grease Contest Entry]

Diaz

New Member
#1
Replied to alkaholik_151 and Rukas awhile ago.

This is me and Kamikazi's entry for the Dame Grease contest (if you haven't heard about it, read here). The quality isn't the greatest because we have a decent mic and the beat's quality sounded degraded in the first place. I rap first, and then me and Kamikazi go back and forth on the chorus, then he does his verse, and then we do the chorus again.

P.O.W. - Right Now (Yousendit Link)

P.O.W. - Right Now (Rapidshare Link)
 

PuffnScruff

Well-Known Member
#2
decided not to wait huh?

anyone else think diaz sounds a lil like cory gunz?

i heard this song last night after a week and a half of bitching at two to get off their ass and make the track already. i have to admit i was sitting in class tonight and i couldnt get their chorus out of my head.

i think they did a pretty good job.
 

Dante

Meyer & Dante Best Friends4eva
#4
i liked it. good energy and comfort with your own styles. no jossy tongue tripping. only technical criticism would be that you both trail off at times whereas each line should be ended strong. lyrical content isn't revolutionary, but it's good stuff and i kept it.
 
#5
yo real good shit, i like diaz's voice better than kamis, but u both got real good flow, and the lyrics r pretty good, but like dante said, it trails off at times, but nothin to worry about. U guys r good for 2 lil white boys hahahah jk
 

S O F I

Administrator
Staff member
#6
I like your voices. It's not a joke when I say that they could be marketable. It's not like half of these accent-fucked raps in streethop. This I could actually hear on the radio. It's a bumpable track, I like it a lot. Your flows are onpoint, but sometimes it seems you guys try to fit too many lines in one bar. Also, like Dante said, you want to end each line strong. The lyrics are solid, just the type needed for a track like this. I know you guys realized that, otherwise I'd HOPE you'd come with some better shit. Just keep working on your mic presence, guys. But yea, you guys compliment each other on the mic. That's good.

DIPSET BITCH!!!
 
#8
very nice track,the lyrics go well with the beat.very catchy too.good job.at times,you two sound like you've gone fuckin mental and you're about to murder someone
 

ArtsyGirl

Well-Known Member
#11
Diaz sounds hot, nice flow and lyrics are fly especially the bit where you say I aint old enough to listen to my own album or something like that was dope, nice hook too ;)
 

keco52

Well-Known Member
Staff member
#12
I dunno why but this sounds a lot different from the other stuff I heard from you guys...I like it, it's hot....saved to ipod....:p
 

Synful*Luv

Well-Known Member
Staff member
#13
Glad you posted it up, as you already know i'm feeling this, lol, it's on my iPod as you already know as well.

It's got good energy and you guys sound good over the beat. You don't sound nervous or unsure of yourselves. Sometimes it was a little hard for me to understand what you were saying but it had decent catch phrases in it like the part where you mention you're not even old enough to buy your own CD, lol

Anyways, it's saved with the other songs I have from u guys, and Diaz, tell Kami that Rendie and Nesha like it too ;) I sent it to them earlier today. He'll know who i'm talkin about, lol :laugh:
 
#14
Sounds Pretty Decent , but the way it is i wouldnt send this in for the contest cuz the vocals sound a lil empty, dont sound like u used any doubles, i think that would do it better, cuz some spots like go low then loud, doubles would make it sound better.
 

Diaz

New Member
#16
EriMakaveli said:
Ayo this beat is crazy and so is your flow. You got this shit down. What beat is this? And what kind of mic do you use and in what environment?
Read this article for information on the beat. I use a Behringer B-1 mic and this is my environment:

 

Diaz

New Member
#18
EriMakaveli said:
ive been to his my space but i can't find the beat on there? mind telling me where it is/ upping it???:D
He only had it on there for a week. They stopped accepting submissions on March 1st.
 

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