I explained why I thought it was so bad in my first post in this thread
Mr Matt said:
I'm really suprised that so many people voted for Immortal Tech's "Dance with the devil" as the "best story telling rap song", please explain your reason. The story is pretty good but the lyrics are total shit and sound like something a 14 year old wrote. I'm not impressed by simply rhyming the last syllable of every line for the whole song, there's no word-play, no flow and most the time he sounds like he's really hard stretched to talk the very basic lyrics over the music.
And I still stand by it. The only half decent thing about the track is that the story has a shock twist at the end, that's it. The actual lyrics are simple nursery-rhyme style words talked way offbeat and most of the time just the last syllable of two lines sound remotely similar.
Immortal Technique said:
His dreams about cars and ice, made him agree
A hardcore nigga is all he ever wanted to be
And so he met them friday night at a quarter to three
Such talent. He makes himself agree with himself?? And I love the "quater to three" part as he had a few more syllables to fill up the line with and that's the best he could come up with, I've heard drunk freestylers come off better than this pish.
To me it just sums up how shitty the competition is when so many people in here have ranted about how great this track is. But my posts have always been about wanting someone to explain to me what is so great about it, not that I believe it sucks. So someone tell me what is good about this track other than it has a shocking end to the story?