some feed back on this verse i laid

#3

Ant

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#7
Be patint dude. 20 of them were probably you checking. :D

Replies wern't exactly comming thick and fast beforen the shut down so I guess it'll be even slower for a while, with members not checking if the board is back etc.

I'm having speaker trouble right now so I can't listen. Hopefully I'll drop feed back tomorrow.
 
#8
I like that "thug poetry" beat.. I used it a couple years back..
your delivery was kinda shakey at the start but it picked up..
I like your word play,good lines,but production quality is poor..
not baD tho..keep droppin..
~1~
 
#10
yeah, I love that one. GASH, the word just feels right in my mouth, lol
just like the real thing.


yeah the beat is tite, I wrote a few songs to this beat over the years.
Your delivery needs a little more cuz the start is shaky, like YGB Youngbugzy said.
Lyrics was tite, nice word play and the backing vocals was set up right.
The only thing that lets it down is the quality, reminds me of the songs I was knocking out back in '97/'98 when I recorded all my shit on tape on my Hi-Fi system.
But you're skill shines thru the poor quality.

In whole, I think you need to get you're self a better mic and new equipment.
Cuz when you do, your shit is going to be blazing hot.

Pz
 
#11
thanks for the feedback man- i just do it for fun right now, not a great producer or anything. just mixed that shit on my comp with some program.
 

Bigg Limn

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Staff member
#13
I love this beat :D U got a cool voice. Quality is horrible as well as the levels. Flow is pretty on point, delivery needs a bit of work. Lyrics R aiight...a bit 2 Pacish though. Not bad though, keep elevatin and achievin perfection.

pz
 

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