yeah, I love that one. GASH, the word just feels right in my mouth, lol
just like the real thing.
yeah the beat is tite, I wrote a few songs to this beat over the years.
Your delivery needs a little more cuz the start is shaky, like YGB Youngbugzy said.
Lyrics was tite, nice word play and the backing vocals was set up right.
The only thing that lets it down is the quality, reminds me of the songs I was knocking out back in '97/'98 when I recorded all my shit on tape on my Hi-Fi system.
But you're skill shines thru the poor quality.
In whole, I think you need to get you're self a better mic and new equipment.
Cuz when you do, your shit is going to be blazing hot.
Pz