some feed back on this verse i laid

[Mr Marz]

ummm yea theres no1 to give feedback to so im just gunna post this.... lemme know what you think plz
http://s5.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3DU561S2VZUDQ0UVEDU5ZX99GI

 

[Mr Marz]

eh?

 

[Sith Angel]

ummm yea theres no1 to give feedback to so im just gunna post this.... lemme know what you think plz
http://s5.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3DU561S2VZUDQ0UVEDU5ZX99GI

sup, you could have posted a reply to alleyezonme0707.
http://www.2pacboard.com/forum/thread124118.html
cuz he was the first one to drop a song here since the boards been back up.

Anyway, I'll check your song later when I get the time to drop my own track.

 

[Mr Marz]

almost 20 views yall assholes cant leave some feedback?

 

[Mr Marz]

25 grimey niggas

 

[Mr Marz]

i would appreciate some kind of feed back here for gods sake!

 

[Ant]

Be patint dude. 20 of them were probably you checking.

Replies wern't exactly comming thick and fast beforen the shut down so I guess it'll be even slower for a while, with members not checking if the board is back etc.

I'm having speaker trouble right now so I can't listen. Hopefully I'll drop feed back tomorrow.

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

I like that "thug poetry" beat.. I used it a couple years back..
your delivery was kinda shakey at the start but it picked up..
I like your word play,good lines,but production quality is poor..
not baD tho..keep droppin..
~1~

 

[Mr Marz]

yea i recorded that shit in my basement as far as production goes, but thanks for the feedback homie

 

[Sith Angel]

yeah, I love that one. GASH, the word just feels right in my mouth, lol
just like the real thing.


yeah the beat is tite, I wrote a few songs to this beat over the years.
Your delivery needs a little more cuz the start is shaky, like YGB Youngbugzy said.
Lyrics was tite, nice word play and the backing vocals was set up right.
The only thing that lets it down is the quality, reminds me of the songs I was knocking out back in '97/'98 when I recorded all my shit on tape on my Hi-Fi system.
But you're skill shines thru the poor quality.

In whole, I think you need to get you're self a better mic and new equipment.
Cuz when you do, your shit is going to be blazing hot.

Pz

 

[Mr Marz]

thanks for the feedback man- i just do it for fun right now, not a great producer or anything. just mixed that shit on my comp with some program.

 

[Mr Marz]

bump.... any1 else?

 

[Bigg Limn]

I love this beat U got a cool voice. Quality is horrible as well as the levels. Flow is pretty on point, delivery needs a bit of work. Lyrics R aiight...a bit 2 Pacish though. Not bad though, keep elevatin and achievin perfection.

pz

 

[Mr Marz]

thanks 4 the feedback... any1 else

 

[Mr Marz]

ummmmm.... bump?

 

[Mr Marz]

i just copped cubase sx and cool edit pro and messed with this a bit... i wanted to know if you think it sounds better than it did before cuz i need to teach myself how to do this shit. http://s27.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0IMJ4K8LB22WF2BG9YJYK8U3OV