it's decent man, I'm feelin the hook. I'm catchin some of what you spit, and some of it is just goin in one ear, out the other. Listening to Common sometimes has the same effect on me. He spits w/so much complexity that I seriously have to stop, skip back, re-listen, and do it again. Might want to try layering your vocals or switching up the flow to emphasize certain lines or parts of lines.