jason_g_718 said:
Well, you have yet to provide a verse for me that you think is lyrically great.
To me what makes it spectacular is the rhyme scheme, the choice of words he choose to use.
That's the best way I can word it. I don't know what you're looking for, but I'm still waiting for you to provide a verse you think is lyrically great.
a crooked I freestyle;
"They cought me slippin with dishonesty,they cohearsed me with reversed psychology/
the trick knowledgey (?) policys utilised by this colony/
fed me with poisones philosofies based on racist-hypothesis
subconsiously they were mocking me
for beeing the first to walk this earths surface
and now their purpose is to convert something worthless to something perfect
nervous because I survived the crammin of mental programin
disease infamin while I examin uncle sam'n his thesis/
saying civilisation started with precies(??) history decreases(?) when you whipe out significient pieces
so secretlcy demolish it, archeologists and anthropologist and top colleges won't aknowledge it....."
it continues more. This is raw! If you can't see that this is better, ie has better flow,better rhymescheme better words then Obie Trice, then I'm sorry we just have totally different opinion on what makes a great verse