Congratulations

& I Just want to add......I Only peep poem's i feel & could relate to so to the other poet's dont think im only peeping Menace's shit for the sake of it,Im Not!

This homie's speaking MY mind & How i feel alot of times.......

Pz
 
thx for the reply. I like that you quote other parts than the people before, shows that you might feel it a lil different.
'I'm not happy, but happy with who I am
Hustlin even though I feel like I'm damned'
yeah, that line is important 2 me....cause that'S what's up.

anyway, thx.
 
The.Menace said:
Congratulations

Nothing comes my way, I gotta chase it
can't rest but my destiny - I gotta face it
might be my death but then maybe I'm free
wicked thoughts - congratulations you just turned 23


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I really love poems that finish strong, and with that it was my favourite part. Kinda took me a few reads to enjoy it though, but I think thats your style anyway. Good job.
 
cool drop man, very personal...everything flowed really nice...

but 80% of the people I grew up with are stuck
in this lifestyle - we all run out of luck

^^this was the only line that kinds through the flow out a bit for me....could just be me....but thought id mention it man


peace...keep it up! :)
 
kman_69 replied twice to my poem, sayin different things, good job, :D

thx assassin for the reply
 
Hey man like everyone has been saying its easy to relate to this poem. At least for me. I specially liked "I'm not happy, but happy with who I am". Great job. Liked it a lot.
 
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man, that really hit home with me.... that poem is so close to my life.... you dont know how that makes me feel better that im not the only one goin thru that sort of thing,,, great stuff
 
Wats happening??? Been a long while, Tommy... Good to C u still writing.. what can I say.. This piece is dope.. I'm feelin the emotion, the flow, ur words... how it just is, is perfect - honestly..

I at least try 2 advance in this world of sin
but 80% of the people I grew up with are stuck
in this lifestyle - we all run out of luck

- Feelin that.. It doesnt get any mo real than that.

I'm not happy, but happy with who I am
Hustlin even though I feel like I'm damned
Nothing comes my way, I gotta chase it
can't rest but my destiny - I gotta face it

- damn do I relate to that... Awsome piece Tommy keep it up.. :D

pz
 
What's been happening girl? Well, check the poetry.Drama is what's happenin. Thx for replyin anyway, thx for replyin big limn.
 

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