Young Rebel - Get Away Freestyle- German shit

[Lowridah]

german rap

i wonder what ya'll think bout that

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[Sith Angel]

I'm really feeling the beat. it's the type of shit I would spit on.
I can't really comment on the lyrics with it being in German but I can tell you got some good emotion in your delivery.
The flows sounds tite but I think you need to turn the backing vocals down a little.
cuz it sounds crowded.

Not bad. I was hoping it was gonna be longer (as in a full song)
Drop some more songs. I would love to hear some more from you. keep it up.

Holla back on my new drop. 'Lifted Up'

 

[Tru Principle]

Naturally Ive got to agree wtih Sith..

I can't comment on the lyrics but you've got a good voice homie, beat sounds really cool and you got a strong voice. Quality seems to be solid, so good job... perahps if you can drop something in english if you're an English mc... I could drop more constructive feed back...

Holla back man 1.

 

[freshprince]

I'm really feeling the beat. it's the type of shit I would spit on.
I can't really comment on the lyrics with it being in German but I can tell you got some good emotion in your delivery.
The flows sounds tite but I think you need to turn the backing vocals down a little.
cuz it sounds crowded.

Not bad. I was hoping it was gonna be longer (as in a full song)
Drop some more songs. I would love to hear some more from you. keep it up.

Holla back on my new drop. 'Lifted Up'

Holla! I agree with Mr. Sith here. Your vocals are nice, very good tone of voice you're using on this song. Again, I'm in the same position as Sith, I'm American with only Italian and Polish blood, no German language knowledge. So, despite the fact that I can't rate your lyricism because I don't know the German language. But, as Sith said, your vocals are very nice, good flow, good mood. HOWEVER, I also agree again with Sith that the beat is very banging. Well, I shouldn't say "banging" because it's not the type of song to be "banging". "Hail Mary" is banging. "How Do U Want It" was banging. "We All Die One Day" is an absolute KILLER song.

Anyway, the beat is DEFINATELY hot shit, definately something I'd lay some vocals on. It's almost on some "Dear Mama" shit. I'm an underground emcee here in Detroit and I have a few songs written that would absolutely fit like a glove to the beat.

Overall, excluding a critique of your lyricism (I can't grade lyrics if I don't understand them) based on your flow, the beat, delivery, overall mood the song gives you, considering all these things, I'd say it's about 4.5 mics.

If you post your lyrics dogg so I can peep 'em it might make me raise my critique to 5 mics.

 

[Lowridah]

i know ya'll wont understand the lyrics, it's ok cause i wanted to know if you like my flow, voice and shit
the content is nothing special, just some battle / representing
i'm happy about the positive feedback
it's a mobb deep beat
thanks and let the feedback coming holla

here are the lyrics

ich trage uhren von prada, pink wie juelz santana
die huren wolln labern , solche huren wie kada',
labern mit dem coolen star da , ich mach in ruhe mein para ,
sie gucken hin aber, du schwuchtel kriegst nada , ay
wie war das damals wirklich? die kids kamen aus dem viertel,
wir warn nich arm doch nich fürstlich/ reich wie's ein fürst ist ,
du hast ein loch im cap , du bist soft und rappst,
doch der koch des raps , is back wie gekochtes crack
ich koch des crack , bitches nehmen cock für crack,
ich box sie weg , ihr kopf is weg ich klopf die kecks ,
ich zähl offen cash , viele hier hoffen es ,
das ich nich back komm, schieb für vier wochen streß ,
ich doppel des geld und dropp 14 täglich mixcds
mach lediglich mix cds , mach für die ladys und chicks cds,
mach wie nix cds, häng bloß nich mit leuten wie diesem,
ich bin der deutsche vin diesel , und will leute erschießen,
ich bin nich der beste im fach, doch das aufnehm lohnt
bin nich der kaptain der yacht doch bin auf dem boot,
meine tausend flows, machten tausend tot,
und in zukunft hoff ich, auf nen haufen moss,
ein ganzer haufen hoes, will jetz schlange anstehn,
die schlange in die handnehm, und dann gehn, ich kann sehn
wie die wende eintritt, ich brauch nich die hände nur ein tritt,
und du fliegst um wie wenn godzila die wende eintritt,

 

[Lowridah]

ah push it

 

[Hussein Da Don]

I aint understand the song, lol but ya voice is good, keep elevatin homie

 

[Razorblade]

Have to respect that forgein flavour
I like the beat and the delivery; you have good presence but unfortunately my German is limited to "Hello" so I can say a thing about lyrics or content.
Your flow seems to be on point tho. I think .
:thumb:

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beat has always been a favorite of mine since I heard Snoop spit on it a few years back on the ChuuchHouse Mixtape 2. Lyrics...seem like they rhyme lol. I'unno I cant really comment 2 well on this. It sounds jumbled, but that could jus be the language of it. Flow sounds fine and on point, delivery seems aiight. Keep elevatin.

Peace

 

[Lowridah]

push it

 

[Lukkey]

What up doe U took tha mobb deep boy get away I'm feel u...Even though I don't know German I could tell u was spittin' shit was tight...10/4