You may not know it

radkin

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London son
You may not know it
But you are appreciated
There’s many times I’ve wanted to say I love you
But every time I’ve hesitated
There’s something stopping me deep inside
But I know not what it is
It takes away my ability to speak
And to look you in the eye
You may not know it
But because of this
I’ve sat alone and cried
 
And to look you in the eye
You may not know it
But because of this
I’ve sat alone and cried
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i luv this line cause i feel u on it, keep it up good writing
 
yep, walk up to her n say "I..... ummmmm.....I.......luvyou". Nothing worse than watching the 'bus' leave without us because we didn't share how we felt. Maybe you can write her a poem, or give her this one...
 
radkin said:
You may not know it
But you are appreciated
There’s many times I’ve wanted to say I love you
But every time I’ve hesitated
There’s something stopping me deep inside
But I know not what it is
It takes away my ability to speak
And to look you in the eye
You may not know it
But because of this
I’ve sat alone and cried

This piece is truly heartfelt and comes across with astounding honesty, I can understand where you are coming from aswell. Sometimes its difficult to express your love for a person but it is usually worth it.

Hope you keep writing like this.
 

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