why tupac is misunderstood (the essay)

[Henry]

thats a good essay man...i hope u fixed the spelling errors in there

 

[Ashur]

I read your work. It’s not bad, but not as good as I thought it’d be. I know that your tried to be quick and tell the story ”why Pac is misunderstood”.

You made some good points, but you needed to put more quotes, more examples and tell about emotions.

You’d tell about courses on Tupac etc.

Obviously you did a good work.

 

[Dante]

it was ok, but like people stated before, it's not very original...

Tupac recorded both negative and positive music and everything in between

lines like this subtract from your paper. aside from the fact that it's missing punctuation - ok, you're trying to sound smart, and i can accept that, but tell me what exactly is inbetween the polar opposities of positive and negative? was keep ya head up 72.9% positive? be concise and don't blather on about things that you cannot support with fact. a paper that is one page of power lines will beat out a paper that is five pages long that makes statements that it cannot back up or support. my last suggestion is to organize your thoughts better using single-topic paragraphs. an outline before the writing stage would help.

 

[Ghetto_Ghost]

thank you everyone for you advice.

i got my results today i got an 88%