Untitled drop from MATW95

MATW95

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Tonight I read several articles about Mumia Abu-Jamal, listened to a Saigon "debate," read a speech from Willie Lynch, and read several articles in the NY Times and Washington Post and wanted to drop something quick on the board:


Take my legs, arms, and shit on my inside
But I'll still say "Fuck You" cuz you could never take my pride
Convert me to your side and alter my ideology
Convince me to be rich and wrong rather than poor and right
Cuz you'd love to seem me impotent while my people's esteem is indigent
But I'll never regress, ready to bear arms instantly
But fuck fightin for Bush, I'd never serve the infantry
You kill my Middle East brothers then say "They were terrorists, see"
I believed you in the beginnin, and intently watched your speeches
Til I found out you were killin based on facial features
So understand that I'd spit and take a shit on your mission
Then laugh in your face when you draft me as a military tactician
 
you know actually real powerful piece , i like the part abbout the rich and wrong , poor and right , i also like the middle east part , u know i am from saudi arabia and i liked that u mentioned it , nice rhymes , but please lose the fucks and shits ,,,,
overall good job and keep it up
 
Take my legs, arms, and shit on my inside
But I'll still say "Fuck You" cuz you could never take my pride

Yeah I like it and the start was my favorite part. Feels a lil like a freestyle...? But yey, I like it.
 
The.Menace said:
Yeah I like it and the start was my favorite part. Feels a lil like a freestyle...? But yey, I like it.

It kinda was a freestyle because the actual verse takes like 30 seconds, but I dunno if it "qualifies" as one because I thought about what I was saying for a little bit longer than I do in a freestyle.
 
MATW95 said:
Tonight I read several articles about Mumia Abu-Jamal, listened to a Saigon "debate," read a speech from Willie Lynch, and read several articles in the NY Times and Washington Post and wanted to drop something quick on the board:


Take my legs, arms, and shit on my inside
But I'll still say "Fuck You" cuz you could never take my pride
Convert me to your side and alter my ideology
Convince me to be rich and wrong rather than poor and right
Cuz you'd love to seem me impotent while my people's esteem is indigent
But I'll never regress, ready to bear arms instantly
But fuck fightin for Bush, I'd never serve the infantry
You kill my Middle East brothers then say "They were terrorists, see"
I believed you in the beginnin, and intently watched your speeches
Til I found out you were killin based on facial features
So understand that I'd spit and take a shit on your mission
Then laugh in your face when you draft me as a military tactician


Powerful piece, I wasn't too keen on all the cursing though, a lil is fine but it just seemed a tad over the top imo. My fave part is I believed you in the beginnin, and intently watched your speeches/Til I found out you were killin based on facial features - just really like those 2 lines.
 

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