Razorblade said:
That beat is nice; not sure I've heard it before, who's the producer?
Altought that's a nice beat, the problem with it is since the vocals are always going in the background, they stand to overshadow your delivery and thats what going on when Im listening to it.
Flow on the intro is sloppy, espcially around the part where your talking about wearing a suit and being formal - the line's pretty nice tho.
Hook is generic, right down the "we thuggin' fo' sho'" line as well as the DMX "if you love something let it go" line round the 2 minute mark.
It's hard to comment on this track as I said cos the background vocals are so distracting but i thought what I could hear was pretty generic. I prefered "Thinking Back"
Sup sup, Thanks for the feedback.
First off, the beat is from the diplomats - diplomatic immunity vol 1 Heatmakerz on the beat.
Secondly, I feel u if u prefer the other track more than this. Its a whole nother category. Tho I personally feel this one is better, but thats just a matter of oppinion and flavour.
I'm not sure I know what you mean with generic, but all I can say is that, the chorus kinda just came to me like a freestyle. So I just felt like, hey let it be natural even if its a bit "played out"...
The line u talkin bout is not DMX to me. Tho I know he spit a similar line in some song. I guess its like that saying. "there's nothin new under the sun" To some it will be biting, to some it will be a cliche and to some it will be something new. All depending on where u heard it first, and I guess I spit it for the ones who aint heard it. If u ask me True Wisdom don't care bout origin.
Peace
