U Got Nothing & Beneath The Surface

U Got Nothin...
Well qualitys nasty as a hookers poonanni...but flows pretty solid, keepin the verse animated wit ya delivery as well as adlibs so good job on that portion. Nice verse tho, jus need better quality/production now lol

pz

EDIT:
Aand 2 the other 1 I 4got...
...nice rawr, good way 2 open. Flows pretty nice on this, this feels more like ur typa beat. Ya pronounciations a little hard 2 hear at times on both tracks by the way. Lyrics a bit generic tho. This one started out stronger than it finished...I was lovin how U were flowin at the start of the verse.

Keep the shit up tho and give yo chest a minute, itll heal in no time.

pz #2
 
Dante said:
sorry, this shit's fuckin' weak. this is why most indie hip hop is trash. i'm totally not shocked limn thinks it's dope.
And Im totally not shocked at you being a peice of shit once again...you really should just stay the fuck out of this section - U give nothing but bullshit ass comments, no criticism...ever. Anything that comes out of your mouth or your keyboard has no worth in the world whatsoever.
 
Bigg Limn said:
And Im totally not shocked at you being a peice of shit once again...you really should just stay the fuck out of this section - U give nothing but bullshit ass comments, no criticism...ever. Anything that comes out of your mouth or your keyboard has no worth in the world whatsoever.
keep your 9 to 5. retail hip hop don't want you.

that being said, there are plenty of good producers and artists on this board. i just happen to call corny ass beats and rhymes what they are. if you can't handle me "hating" then keep your shit offline.
 
aight, I C what u trying to do...wit the flow n' all it's aight

az for beat selection...i don't like either beats, they just ain't my style...i juz can't imagine me walking around bumping it on my ipod

flow wise it was good, jus keep practicing

lyrcialy tho it could always be better, i don't think any rapper thinks his lyrical skills are at there best until they dead n' can be examined fully

quality wise it always needs to be better unless u recording in a real studio, one

5/10 overall
 

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