U Dont Kno Me Like That...

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

Well It's Been a long while since i posted uppin here.. I thought I'd share this,its Pretty self explanitory.. Think this is something most ppls can relate too in some stage of there life, when there's just one person who wont back off... so to those who do read- Thanks!


Back up off me - I'm telling u to take 2 steps back
u dont really kno me - so u dont really wanna cross me like that,
coz I'm gona de-fend myself -
Not let anybody else,
Try tell me;
Were I should be - How it should Go
we C differently - So U should kno...

Keep Ur oppinions to yourself -
I dont wanna hear anything you say,
u dont kno what ur taking 'bout -
U just run ur mouth & think that it's ok...
-U dont care who u hurt
who's name u pull thru the dirt,
who's image that u pull down
as long as wen they crash -
Ur around...

Deceatful.. Ur straight evil
You walk thru life day by day - just tryna hurt people,
But when u make that person me
we gonna have to beef this out, Quickly -
I dont care how related u are 2 me
u should've never thought I'd let u talk down 2 me...

You Dont respect me - So I dont respect you
& if u want me 2 respect u - u need 2 respect me too,
that's the way the world works & it dont change on ur account
remember that u dont stand above anybody else -
So u wont disrespect me, Coz I wont let you
ur nothing compared to the challenges I've been thru
so next time u wanna talk,
ask urself if it's just better to walk -
away; coz I'm not gonna let u win
so u should quit the games ur playin,
the words ur sayin' - u should just stop
people like u - should seriously back off...


Back up off me - I'm telling u to take 2 steps back
u dont really kno me - so u dont really wanna cross me like that,
Coz I'm gona de-fend myself -
Not let anybody else,
Try tell me;
Were I should be - How it should Go
we C differently - So U should kno...

 

[Jocka]

nice stuff brat! my fav area is here:

You Dont respect me - So I dont respect you
& if u want me 2 respect u - u need 2 respect me too,
that's the way the world works & it dont change on ur account
remember that u dont stand above anybody else -
So u wont disrespect me, Coz I wont let you
ur nothing compared to the challenges I've been thru
so next time u wanna talk,
ask urself if it's just better to walk -
away; coz I'm not gonna let u win

That stuff we sometimes say or REALLY wanna say to someone. I'm definatly feeling this and completely relating lol. This is a good piece brat. As usual, LOVED IT!

 

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

Thanks 4 peepin this Jocka! lol 5 days up with 1 reply hehe amazing huh? well thanks 4 droppin a quick line, as always its Appreciated heaps!

pz

 

[KJ1]

yeah i was with jocka on this that part was deep and ya could tell it was from the heart........ keep it up

 

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

^^Thanks for Taking the time! Always Appreciated & Glad u was feelin' it!

pz

 

[Bigg Limn]

haha goddamnit i love yo shit girl...most gangsta poetry i ever read lol. I always love it cuz its so real and so raw..jus str8 feeling in 2days language no metaphors really - just the plain & simple facts slapped right in2 yo face. Good shit girl, keep writin!

 

[ImmortalTech]

word.. i thing Jocka and Bigg Limm summed it up pretty nice. That was a dope peice right there. Keep writin'

peace

 

[The.Menace]

Actually I feel like it's a lil rusty, esp since I know what you're able 2. A couple of lines doesn't really rhyme in my opinion and it hurts the structur. Anyway, I'm glad 2 see you around here.

 

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

Limn- Hey! thanks 4 peepin this as always you kno ur feedback is appreciated! the point i wanted to get across with this was easy, so there was no time for complicating this piece, I'm glad u was feelin that!

ImmortalTech- Thanks 4 tha props & takin tha time! Always appreciated!

Menace- Thanks 4 peepin this Tommy! ur feedback is always appreciated!

pz

 

[XrATeD411]

I think a lot of us can definetely relate to this. I havent read any of your other stuff so i cant use this as a measuring stick. Overall though i liked it.

ur nothing compared to the challenges I've been thru
so next time u wanna talk,
ask urself if it's just better to walk -
away; coz I'm not gonna let u win
so u should quit the games ur playin,
the words ur sayin' - u should just stop
people like u - should seriously back off...

This was my favorite part, i cracked a smile when i read it because i think we all know someone like that and no matter how much you tell them they dont get the message!

I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

 

[.:ORiGiNALOLDiESz:.]

I liked it.
Understand where the feelings come from.

 

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

thanks 4 checkin it out peeps! Its always appreciated!

pz