Tragedy

[ArtsyGirl]

When will I finally
Reach that one goal
To free my troubled
And lonely soul

Love that part, I agree short n sweet well dark actually but anyway great poem..

 

[Sebastian]

Oh I love this, I missed it, didn't know you're writing. It's different, I like that.

lol, thx for your feedback. yes i write but i feel like i can express my emotions better using my native language. so these few poems in english are just a try to write in another language.

 

[Helena]

Oh WOW. I'm so glad i read this, i was moved by this poem, i can totally relate to this. Do you have any more poems in English? You could post some in German, i can read it a little!lol

Seriously though, you are very talented!

 

[Sebastian]

thx Helena.

i dont think posting poems in german would make much sense since nearly no-one understands german here.

anyway, thx again.

 

[tHuG $TyLe]

Spent some time
Alone in my room
No noise, no light
Nothin but gloom
^Great start. Kinda true in relation to me also.

The rhyming scheme was nice, helped me to understand better.

Overall good poem.

 

[Saint33]

real nice ending :thumb: I felt sum of the rhymes cudda been better, but overall it was a real good poem

and man, u should post some more of ur stuff up

 

[FATAL N FELONY]

Very good poem.