Toy Soldiers - Blackheart & SkitzoFreniak

[SkitzoFreniak]

sup ppl , another fresh drop with my new "mic" which
actually is another headset but the thing sounds the same imo lol
pretty shit but oh well , anywayz

replied to pretty much all here ,
Blackheart has the first verse
SkitzoFreniak the second
the beat is well known lol , i appreciate sum feedback

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/sonclanmusic.htm


pz

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

Im not hateing..I just dont know about this first flow....very weak.
second verse is kool,sound Q is poor.
keep droppin.
~1~

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

tnx for the reply YGB , any feedback is good so no worries
about the hating

BUMP

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

^bump

 

[Sith Angel]

I've never really liked that beat.
I'm not feeling the first guy, the flow is real weak next to the second verse.
You dropping a good message but the Q could be better. You know, I've already told you, When you get a real mic you'll be dropping fire.
Until then, you keep doing what you doing.
In whole it's a nice drop. Holla back on my new drop. Unholy

 

[Bigg Limn]

I'm not sure about this beat...I've been debating on it for a while. I like the sample, and I like the idea...but being a drummer myself, they're fucking horrible snares. Yes it's a good military ripoff, but to be the only drums in the song - it ain't good for a beat. Anyways, past that. First dude's voice is WAY monotone, you need 2 wake up and get some life in your delivery. I understand it's a deep track, but you can still work emotion into a "serious" delivery. Flow was solid, but was pretty stiff...not much flex/rhythm in it. Lyrics were nicely structured, but the lyrics themself were a little plain...just a bit basic. Skitzo ya flow is solid on this, delivery is good...quality is horrible though lol. Pronounciation is pretty clear on this. Lyrics were pretty simple, but that emotion behind your delivery makes em nice as fuck. The verse started slipping a bit along w/ the flow, in my opinion, towards the end though...after the tank/battlefield line. Verse was pretty nice though.

Overall track was decent, you both have your finer points to work on...skitzo you definately gotta get better quality (mine's bad, but at least it ain't all staticky like that, feel bad for you man). Keep elevatin though, not a bad track.

Peace.

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

tnx for the replies yall , i appreciate it , btw i sorted
my mic problem out now , but im not concerned with this
song lol , i didnt like the beat also but i wus only featured
on this one , so im not even bothered redoing this song lol