ToO HiGH - Whut'z Really Good

[Lil KaMiKaZe]

My Replied : Razorable - Cowardz And Crittaz...

Here's a song i recorded some months ago,called "Whut'z Really Good"...i'd like to know what y'all thoughts about it...
P.S : I'm still workin' on my pronunciation...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandid=530479

...PeaCe...

 

[alkaholik_151]

i like the flow......but im not feelin that beat at all
good work, but the beat could be better............1

 

[Razorblade]

First off, thanks for the feedback on my track :thumb:
You got a good voice and you're hook is pretty good - sounds kinda 50 Cent-ish.
Flow's messy but you've got emotion in it which is a good thing. Just make sure you don't try to fit too much into one line or you'll find yourself rushing to get the lyrics out and not only mess up your flow but people won't understand you. That said, when the flows on point it's really good and your delivery is tight.
Work on that but you got lots of potential man so keep 'em comin.

 

[Lil KaMiKaZe]

Thx A lot For Yo Replies

 

[Lil KaMiKaZe]

Uppin'

 

[Mr Marz]

for some reason im having trouble understanding the lyrics in the song. i cant really make out much of the words.

 

[Lil KaMiKaZe]

for some reason im having trouble understanding the lyrics in the song. i cant really make out much of the words.

that could help if you give me the reasons...it's my pronunciation?

 

[Mr Marz]

yea i guess thats what it is, i didnt notice that you werent american tho my badd...

 

[Simon]

Hey man,

I like your voice its something i havent really heard before which is nice. Hook is nice also cos its catchy. Dont really like the lyrics, like many people dropping on here there are a bit gangsta, which has been done soooooo much. But you have a really nice flow and ear for a hook so it turns out to be a solid track.

 

[Lil KaMiKaZe]

thx a lot

 

[Lil KaMiKaZe]

and if someone wanna collab...just tell me

 

[Bigg Limn]

Yah definately gotta work on not slurrin ur words so much and spittin that shit a lil clearer. QUalitys a bit poor, but not 2 much clipping or pops...could turn the vocals up a few dB more. Flows pretty solid, U got a good voice and presence. Jus work on that pronounciation,