Stuck in the game

[Y G B youngbugzy]

WHUT UP THO???
yea its ya boy ygB..I posted another one my joints
"stuck in the game"
on my soundclick, lemme know what you think..
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/ygbyoungbugzy.htm
~ygB~

 

[Razorblade]

Love your flow on this one and you got a real good voice.
From this song and the last one I heard from you (cant remember the name right now, sorry) I can tell you're a good storyteller but the songs are too short. You should think about getting into the 3 x 16 bar format and putting out a full length track. That way people are more likely to take you serious as an artist.

Keep writin' and droppin'.
Look forward to the next one.

 

[Sith Angel]

yeah, you got that soundclick page up. I'm liking it.
plus I gotta give you props on that 'Anything else...?'
apart of the interview. I'm feeling that.

ok, on to the track. I'm feeling the beat and the theme was tite. It's true what Razorblade said, your dame good at storytelling. Plus I agree, you do need to think about the format of your songs/tracks.

Lyrics/flow - tite and sharp as hell.
I like this track. Keep it up man.

I'll holla at ya when I get some time free. until then, keep ya head up bro.

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

yea imm felling what you talkin about for real..IM trying ta get better at the full track,3x16,im trying ta learn how ta lay'em out propper.
thanks for the feed back.I always appreicate your opinions.

yea BIG DAWG holla at ya boy, lets do a track.
you to razor if ur down with it, lets all do a collabo..
holla holla
~1~

 

[Advocate]

opening the beat theres a lot of energy, sounds like a crunk beat, not really feeling the intro or if its the chorus, reminds me of some eastsidaz shit, slower flow, simple rhyme schemes but it seems to be working out for you. in a hundred percent honesty man this track you mixed it and recorded it tight, and your working with the beat, but im just not feeling the content/lyrics, its just the style of rap im not feeling much.

but you got it down.

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