Still Rizin On

#9
MarvelouZ said:
lyrics very nice, chose of beat 2, flow kinda messy and u need better equipment but overall quite good
yea I agree, but overall nice lyrics..and I like the beat aswell,
like he said the flow is a lil choppy but it gets by..kool joint.
keep droppin.
~bugzy~
 

Bigg Limn

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#11
Whoa...levels R way 2 fucked up. Beat needs 2 be a lot higher, back vocals need 2 be a lot lower, and main vocals need 2 be higher. Beat sounds OK from what I can hear. Flow is a bit jumbled @ points, but overall its pretty solid. Work on ur pronounciation a bit 2, some words is a bit hard 2 understand. Hook is OK...sounds like U had a bit of trouble pronouncin his name though (lol I don't blame U). Overall track sounds like U whisperin though, Im guessin its cuz of ur recording situation...if not, then fix that. Not a bad track, just keep workin on them fine points.

Peace
 

Nut

New Member
#12
Limn said:
Whoa...levels R way 2 fucked up. Beat needs 2 be a lot higher, back vocals need 2 be a lot lower, and main vocals need 2 be higher. Beat sounds OK from what I can hear. Flow is a bit jumbled @ points, but overall its pretty solid. Work on ur pronounciation a bit 2, some words is a bit hard 2 understand. Hook is OK...sounds like U had a bit of trouble pronouncin his name though (lol I don't blame U). Overall track sounds like U whisperin though, Im guessin its cuz of ur recording situation...if not, then fix that. Not a bad track, just keep workin on them fine points.

Peace
Tnx for the feedback. More ppl have told me to work on pronounciation and that it sounds like i'm whispering but that's not true. I don't know why it sounds like that but i hear it too. I know the back vocals are too high so ill work on that :thumb:
 

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