I like the beat, it's different and I love that.
The intro part sounds like it builds up to be a heavy hard hitting track but when the full beat kicks in it's a bit of a let down. it sounds like the beat is missing something.
Quality is kinda nice, it sounds better than most of the tracks. Was this done in a studio or with that head set? Cuz if it was done in a studio it needs to mixed a lot better but if you made this with the same equipment you used on the other songs. It sounds like your quality is getting better and your loosing that compressed sound to your vocals.
You come sharp on the flow like always and you drop some tite lyrics. You do need to focus a bit more on the breath control but it's nothing to really worry about.
I love the lines about, writing about everything you see and come across. I feel that.
I think the hook could be better but it sounds alright.
I’m not feeling the Fx on the vocals at the end. I see what you were trying to do but I think there...... to wet or dry. I don't know. Maybe a real producer knows. lol
But they don't sound right. I know that.
Over all, I liked this drop. Its not one of your best, cuz I've heard better from you but the Q is good and I can see your coming up and getting closer to that fire we was talking about.
Keep it up
Pz
Ps I'll be dropping a new song soon in the dropzone. Plus don't forget to Rep.