Shot 21 ft J Loose - Diamonds From Leicester City

[Shot 21]

Replied to The Cartel - Wonda Why They Call U Snitch and Limn - Getcha Krunk.

This is my first solo songwhich features my fellow S.O.N member J Loose. As you can probably guess its over the Kanye West - Diamonds From Sierre Leone beat. The subject varies as the song goes on.

Chorus: Shot 21 (and Shirley Bassey lol)
Verse 1 + 2: Shot 21 (I go rap straight through the 2 verses going over the chorus)
Verse 3: J Loose
Outro: Shot 21

I had the first verse written up for months but had to do the second verse the night before the studio. Also the instrumental is the normal Diamonds, but the intro is from the remix as I like this one better.

http://s37.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=15XOQO4M2HOID0BVENX73HXSAH

http://rapidshare.de/files/6960789/Shot_21_ft_J_Loose_-_Diamonds_From_Leicester_City.m4a.html

 

[Shot 21]

Sorry for the fact you have to download it but I cant get it onto Soundclick.

 

[Shot 21]

If you like this song, I have a proposition for you

http://www.streethop.com/forum/showthread.php?p=383983#post383983

 

[Malkz]

Weak.

 

[bigCASH]

Weak.

i wouldn't say it's weak cause if you're going to say that you need to give some feedback backing your opinion...i think what you were rapping about fit the mood of the song but the lyrics can use a little work

 

[Malkz]

^If i hear a song and think it's weak, then i don't wish to comment it.

 

[Shot 21]

i wouldn't say it's weak cause if you're going to say that you need to give some feedback backing your opinion...i think what you were rapping about fit the mood of the song but the lyrics can use a little work

Thanks for some REAL feedback. Repped.

 

[Ant]

^If i hear a song and think it's weak, then i don't wish to comment it.

I suggest you get the fuck out of the unsigned hype section then, people in here dont just want one word comment, give some constructive feedback or nothing at all.

 

[Malkz]

I suggest you get the fuck out of the unsigned hype section then, people in here dont just want one word comment, give some constructive feedback or nothing at all.

Chillout m8. That's the sorta shit you hear on ChannelU, but many times worse. The guy might aswell hear the truth... Did you actually hear the song he put up?

His voice is shit, accent is horrible. I suggest he try do something with that. I listened again today and the lyrics are ok, just your voices don't go with the beat.

 

[Shot 21]

Chillout m8. That's the sorta shit you hear on ChannelU, but many times worse. The guy might aswell hear the truth... Did you actually hear the song he put up?

His voice is shit, accent is horrible. I suggest he try do something with that. I listened again today and the lyrics are ok, just your voices don't go with the beat.

Ok thats the type of feedback Im looking for. Repped. Ant your repped as well. 1 Love

 

[JarG]

its allright imo...still could be better

 

[rebelofthadevil]

I think your accent makes it hot cuz it's something different . It gives the song a different feeling. I think the energy is good sometimes but dull at others. Keep it consistent but otherwise just keep making tracks and getting better with expreimenting with different flows and styles.

 

[Quasimodo]

shit is hot. i'm feeling it. we gotta collab. get at me on MSN - markdeez33@aol.com & i'll get you a beat man. that ain't a problem. cuz i saw your PM, you need some beats, i got you. get at me.

mark