S.O.N - Show Yaself (Club Banger)

[Shot 21]

Replied to Limn - Slayerhater and Rukas - Youngline Thang

This is basically a club banger about them girls who like to get wild in the club. It is produced by C Ricks.

INTRO: J Loose
CHORUS: Shot 21
VERSE 1: Shot 21
VERSE 2: J Loose

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=406268 (second one down)

 

[j_loose]

Props to my man shot on dis track the chorus is a stroke of mothafuckin genius

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beats aite, good club shit...like that bass hit. Synths nice. Flows a lil choppy, not 2 bad on first verse. Lyrics pretty basic but its all g. Hooks aite. 2nd dudes a bit weaker on the flow...verse dont sound as good production-wise either. Lyrics bout the same. Not bad, wrk on them finer points mre and itd bang in the clubs prolly.

 

[Razorblade]

Beats nice; made for this type of song - Real Lil Jon stuff.
In my opinion, the levels need tweaking. The beat is way too low and your losin some of the tracks potential because of that - there's no thump if you know what I mean!

Lyrically, these type of songs can be kind of generic but I like Shot 21's stuff, especially that line about the jeans on the bedroom floor :laugh: Your flows impressive too although it flaters in places.

J Loose's verse doesnt have the same impact and the intro is really drawn out but for a club banger I guess it's alright.
Sort out the levels and cut the intro and you'd have an impressive track there.
I havent been on here in a while so I dont know if you've dropped any other kind of track but I look forward to hearin more of your stuff.