You should really convert your audios to mp3s for smaller size, and get a soundclick page or something if you're going to start doing a lot of music - it's much easier. And you gotta wait more than a few hours for replies on your tracks, people are from all around the world here and work on all different types of schedules; but give it time and they'll peep. Anyways, onto the track...
Yeah beat's nice. First dude, feelin the delivery - flow is pretty solid. Lyrics were nicely structured, subject matter is a bit played though. Overall verse was solid though. Hook was a bit odd...kind of a lazy way of doin a hook. Don't understand the spacing between it either, should've at least added some talking or somethin like that to break the silence. 2nd dude's delivery is good, sound like you run out of breath a lot though, gotta work on that breathe control. Lyrics were a bit weaker than the first - same type of subject matter. Flow was pretty solid though, but breathe control made it a bit harsh. Quality sounds pretty clear, but overall levels are low - vocals could be a bit higher, and the overall track volume could be a bit higher. But I could be wrong, my ears are fucked up right now, so nevermind that. You guys worked well on the track, your subject matter went together and your styles matched pretty well. You just gotta work on the finer points of song structuring, breathe control and lyrical content and all that. Keep elevatin though, definately a solid track.
Peace.
