Rukas - Real Talk
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Short but very good.
Apart from "I'm coming" this is the best I've heard from you. I liked all the tracks you done last year but these 2 new verses are 10x better. Good stuff. Keep it up.
But now you have to make a track. I need more than 16 so I can bump it in my car.
Apart from "I'm coming" this is the best I've heard from you. I liked all the tracks you done last year but these 2 new verses are 10x better. Good stuff. Keep it up.
But now you have to make a track. I need more than 16 so I can bump it in my car.
yo son... linx was telling me about you... this "real talk" ish.. nice.. I like it.. the piano beat is mad nice... myself.. I can't sing either an do it on tracks as well 
so I fuck with that.. overall... shit was mad nice.. but if you need another verse on it.. holler @ your boy...
I sent you an invite on myspace too pimpin.. holler.
so I fuck with that.. overall... shit was mad nice.. but if you need another verse on it.. holler @ your boy... I sent you an invite on myspace too pimpin.. holler.
yo Rukas, i'm definitly feeling your flow man....your style, your lyrics cause it's real refreshing to hear a true mc....bringing it back to lyrically killing your rap enemies...you know....cause now i'm really used to hearing i'll murder you or i got more money than you'll ever see in your life type shit....good shit
some people are telling you to expand it but i say just leave it like this its raw. the beat is hot, how the fuck do you loop other beats? isnt that a lot of work. god dam pro tools so hard to use. not feeling the intro, when you talk about people doing it wrong but i understand it is in relation to real ish, your singing is fine, its subtle and short. your flow and delievery are what shine man, seriously, tight compact little track, its dope.
keep it up
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keep it up
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I'm definitely feeling the track Rukas.. you've been coming off extremely nice and polished as of late... keep up the good work...
The beat is sick, really feeling it. Parts of your verse are a little stiff though, it sounds like you have a little trouble vocalizing sometimes. You hesitate over the word instead of just stright dropping it. Like "so I bla-zed the truth" in the second line. You could throw more emotion in it, pause before "so I" and just drop the line "so I blazed the truth" with no hesitation. Like your lyrics though, keep it up.
Very nice flow. Hot track. Acually burned it to a cd and bump it when I'm driving. Wish it was longer though. I know it's only a freestyle, but damn if you managed to turn this into a full song? You'd need three fire companies just to stop the heat.
I was expecting more dude. But great job. Short and sweet i guess, keep people on the edge of their seat. It's probably the 3rd song i've heard form your lame ass but i like this the most. The beat is crazy and you did well kido. you did well
Homie I heard this before you released it and I liked it then and still like it now 
. It's a great remix of an already great track. Good job man, your fow is really stable and doesn't go off.
. It's a great remix of an already great track. Good job man, your fow is really stable and doesn't go off.
Nice track; content goes perfect with the mood of the beat and your flow works wonders on it.
The opening's kinda weak but I suppose it sets the story for the track so that's cool. I agree wi Phoenix in that its way to short; it's the kind of beat that you really want to get in to but by the time you do, it's over.
I didnt notice what Limn and Phoenix were sayin bout the flow; i think it went well but I suppose in the end that's down to you.
Keep droppin.
http://www.2pacboard.com/forum/thread138930.html
Check that out if you get the chance.
Peace
The opening's kinda weak but I suppose it sets the story for the track so that's cool. I agree wi Phoenix in that its way to short; it's the kind of beat that you really want to get in to but by the time you do, it's over.
I didnt notice what Limn and Phoenix were sayin bout the flow; i think it went well but I suppose in the end that's down to you.
Keep droppin.
http://www.2pacboard.com/forum/thread138930.html
Check that out if you get the chance.
Peace
Am i the only one who didnt like this?
Real Talk, what talk, you really said nothing. The flow was blah also, i dont want to say forced but you try to fit so much or little in one bar you have to pause between it, makes it real choppy. Its like your holding a word in the middle of a bar so it can end right, but it sounds completely wrong. Your rhyme scheme is pretty basic also, the first 4 bars were elementary, i would say try harder but i think thats what your doing to much of, let these words come to you. By the way your singing thing dont sound bad, its not like your really singing anyway but that would be the least of my worries if i was you, construct a style and find your flow, keep it up though.
Real Talk, what talk, you really said nothing. The flow was blah also, i dont want to say forced but you try to fit so much or little in one bar you have to pause between it, makes it real choppy. Its like your holding a word in the middle of a bar so it can end right, but it sounds completely wrong. Your rhyme scheme is pretty basic also, the first 4 bars were elementary, i would say try harder but i think thats what your doing to much of, let these words come to you. By the way your singing thing dont sound bad, its not like your really singing anyway but that would be the least of my worries if i was you, construct a style and find your flow, keep it up though.
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