Rukas - I'm Comin'

[Mase]

Soundclick seems to be fucking around, I was in a feedback mood aswell.

 

[Rukas]

Soundclick seems to be fucking around, I was in a feedback mood aswell.

It on my myspace account to, which I know u have

 

[Mase]

Haha okay. I'll start off saying I do like mixtape a non mainstream rapper flowing over an already famous beat.
One thing that gets me about The Drope Zone is the awful quality on tracks, with this song that isn't the case. To whoever said that he goes off beat is not listening close enough, you do manage to stay on beat Rukas.
Your flow is very good, and that is and always has been your strength. The thing I like about listening to your shit is that 3/4 of the songs you put out, you improve on. I like it how you spit with a bit of emotion here, you are usually lacking that. The lyrics are good, some good punch lines in there and it suits the beat and your flow nicely. The lyrics to this song are a bit more complex than your usual shit and I like it, am I the only one that thinks the lyrics on this resemble Crooked I?
9/10

 

[damon]

i liked it rukas, it was tight, good delivery, nice flow, but i think that the vocals were too high, still a dope track though :thumb:

 

[bigmack]

Wack

edit: i should give a reason...

sounds like elevator music,shit put me to sleep.flow is real slow, sure its on beat i'll give u that. some words sound a little fucked up when u say them cuz u can really hear that ur trying to slow them down to get them on the beat. its just myyyyyyyyyy opinion im not hating man

 

[2pac4prez2004]

Wack

edit: i should give a reason...

sounds like elevator music,shit put me to sleep.flow is real slow, sure its on beat i'll give u that. some words sound a little fucked up when u say them cuz u can really hear that ur trying to slow them down to get them on the beat. its just myyyyyyyyyy opinion im not hating man

Not erupting beef, but u sound like some one that needs to listen to the track a couple of times before you appreciate it, rukus is on flow, good lyrical content i think he aced it, isnt a 5 for the poll but it also doesnt deserve any less than 4/3, its good, if you aint feeling this check out his 'oh lord' :thumb: and its good rukus, overall 4, just agreeing with some other guy when he said the vocals are a 'tad' too high :thumb: enjoyed it, keep them coming

 

[AmerikazMost]

not bad ruk...inoticed a couple spots where you had to break from your flow tho to get your line in (like the condom line)...other than that, i didn't hear anything wrong with it...i'm going to give it a 4

 

[CalcuoCuchicheo]

Yeah it was pretty nice.

Have to agree with devils_adok8, a substantial amount of time went to waste on the intro.

However the rhymes were nice & flow fit the beat.

Also, I was pretty damn surprised with the lack of Aussie accent.

Did you tweak your accent at all?

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beat's alright, gets a lil repetetive yeah - but the vocals kinda hide the repetetiveness. Intro'd be better if U added more shit 2 it. Flow is a bit weak on this...its pretty on point...but its a bit 2 slow for the beat @ times, jus sounds lazy tryna stay on beat. Some of the lines go over 2 much and it don't sound clean - messes up the flow for a second. Lyrics were pretty nice though, I liked that condom line but I wish you'd fix it so it didn't run over. This was a decent verse, just need 2 make the flow more "alive" so it doesn't sound like U falling asleep tryna catch the beat.

Peace.

 

[Ant]

Yeah, this is good. I like that beat, intro drags abit, should say some more stuff in there, because it sounds amaturish as it is. I love the lyrics, they're very nice, and your voice/accent sounds good. Also the quality in tearms of sound here was very good. Like has been said though, flow is kindof lazy pretty much all the way throughout, finnishing bars late etc. Sort that out and this would be a very solid drop.

 

[Rukas]

^^ Thanks a lot guys. I like my flow on it, but maybe I should of done it more energetic, Ill take that into consideration next time.

That pesky condom like I know I just fit it in lol. The waste.. line.. Pause was on purpose, just a tie in to the next line after that.

Thanks for the comments.

I was thinking bout putting a movie sample on the intro or something but got lazy and just decided to drop it.

Ive moved on, probably wont be going back to this track, if it was a full song I would, but eh.

Peace.

 

[Eric]

Although I never liked this beat, your lyrics are great. Different flow than what I'm used to hearing from you. Great production. I wish it were longer (I guess that's a good thing, right? ). Keep it comin'.

 

[crittaz]

ahh limn said exactly wat i was trying to say. not that it was off beat. but it sounded like u were trying real hard to stay on. if that makes sense. but compared to ur past work. its waaaay better. i definitely see u improving.

 

[Bigg Limn]

You people always try 2 steal my comments!

 

[Advocate]

i looked so hard for this instrumental im happy that its out there

little too much intro shit for me
you sound really good on the beat, and your flow/rhyme scheme is working perfectly with the beat, not feeling the opening few lines

"behind my waist....line" dope

like how you end the verse
at around 1:18 i cant hear a line, but this is me being as anal as possible because i know your experienced

a

 

[Rukas]

i looked so hard for this instrumental im happy that its out there

little too much intro shit for me
you sound really good on the beat, and your flow/rhyme scheme is working perfectly with the beat, not feeling the opening few lines

"behind my waist....line" dope

like how you end the verse
at around 1:18 i cant hear a line, but this is me being as anal as possible because i know your experienced

a

"but if that means i get paid and can take my girl out,
imma break some "shells" like i was looking to take the pearl out,"

Double meaning in shells

 

[Rukas]

Here are the four haters that voted 1, but were too chicken to post a comment.

Aristotle, bigmack, Rock, tupak05

Hater = someone who will hate, but not be man enough to stand by their opnion, nor have any real justification.

Thanks to everyone who posted a comment. All feedback is appreciated.

 

[Jurhum]

How are you going to call them haters? If they didn't like your song and voted against it, they don't have to explain to you why they don't like it. Maybe it doesn't appeal to them. Maybe it's you they don't like. So, you put a poll. People will vote based on their opinion.

 

[Rukas]

Call me up my self if you want, but out of 5, I seriously dont think anyone could legitly give it a 1. It may not be the greatest track on earth, but a 1 it is not. 1 is just utter trash, which this is not.

 

[Jurhum]

But wasn't you who put the poll up and you that put the option 1 there.