Razorblade - Vomit

[Razorblade]

Replied to Phoenix Crooked Cross, Limn and Deliquint.
Im gonna get on the rest soon as I can.

I dont wanna say much about the song. You're either gonna like it or really hate it. Oh, and the levels are off on purpose; I did it in one take which you'll notice every once in a while.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/razorblademusic.htm
The song's called Vomit and it should be at the top. MP3 or Hi-Fi would be ur best option to really hear it well.

LYRICS
Im sicker than old chicken and raw egg shake//
Each rhymes got weight to make your head break//
So for your legs sake I suggest you quit like checkmate//
Then break cos Im comin thru like and earthquake//
To level your estate with a style so sick//
that it'll turn stomach like watching old ladies suck dick//
And I come so quick that you wont even see me//
Til you see me bounce back like the record just skipped//
then i'll pummel you again like faggots in ass cheeks//
leave you like an old oven talkin about how you once had heat//
Im like a break beat calling you out of your seat//
convince you to break your own neck once you get to your feet//
and I wont let you rest cos Im runnin on empty//
and I dont wanna end you so please dont tempt me//
we could battle all night cos my rhymes are aplenty//
and you know I can bring the heat cos its the devil that sent me//

Hook
They call my style vomit cos its sick what I spit//
they call it tongue twister cos you cant lick this shit// (x2)
they call my style bush becuse you hate it//
envious like the bush that you love clean shaven//
they call my style ice cos you just cant break it//
they call your style sick cos its regurgitated//

Im a skilled chinese chef serving dishes devine//
your hotdog stand is failing cos they all want mine//
cos your secret is obvious yet mines sublime//
the fact your mother even supports you is simple a crime//
you fight fire with fire but not dignity//
bite my style for your own but then you see//
I make cooking look easy but the complexity//
only becomes obvious when you dont sound like me//
see food poisoning aint the same as simply being sick//
you're taking one subject and throwing out the same old shit//
my illness is from exposure/my sickness is legit//
16 years in the wasteland then mileria bit//
so take the spotlight now/Im at no urgent station//
I can sit here and wait for your expiration//
so rep all the cats you want/all states and all nations//
you'll be out when the people want whats really sick/not regurgitation//

Hook

Subjects like liquors I can concoct/
complex content raps that'll hit your chest hot//
Im the composite cocktail and your the one shot//
I grab it like a hard on but your on the flop//
and speakin of shots/once you've had enough//
you start to puke up and its all the same stuff//
like the alcohol sunk to the bottom of your stomach and bounced back up//
regurgitated so clearly that it seems untouched//
thats a metaphor stupid/Im talkin bout your rhymes//
repetitive like/shit I heard that a thousand times//
so whether you actually rock cock or claim to cock nines//
Im on the level all I claim is 05 its mine!//

 

[Sith Angel]

first off, thanx for the comments on my track.
Ok, on to yours.
I like the beat, I could see my self ripping the fuck outta this beat. lol
First off, it sounds to me like you reading the lyrics of the page. cuz your pronunciation is off a lot. So it's a good thing you posted the lyrics. lol

I think if you memorised the lyrics, you would have dropped 'em a lot better.
The mixing sounds good, your vocals are clean and clear. I like that.

In whole, it's a nice drop. Keep 'em coming man.

 

[Ant]

Beat is nice, good choice there. I like the lyrics too, some nice lines in there. Particularly liked the "Thy call your style sick cuz it's regurgatated" in the hook, that was hot as hell. :thumb:

Brilliantly clear sound, voice was at the right level and could here it, nice and crisp. Some of your lines were hard to understand - either because of accent, it's strong Irish but ain't gonna hate on that, do your thing, but sometimes you spit too many sylables in one bar and I just don't think that works. Words are getting lost there.

Overall, it's a nice drop, I like it, but it can be improved upon.

Peace.

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

yea man, I agree with Sith,
sounds like your reading, memorizr ur ish and you'll be st8.
sound q was good,I like you content, creativity is everything.
~1~

 

[Xero]

Yep flow is choppy, quality is alright could improve, seems there's no post production. Lyrics are tight, i liked it.

Just work on your flow.

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beats decent, not one of my fav from Wysh though.

From the start, quality don't sound real good. Not real harsh, but just not good quality. Flow is real choppy...need 2 work on breath control and bar structure. U're doin more than basic rhyme scheme which is a good start. Just gotta work on expanding on that higher. But work on ur flow first...get that solid, then ur delivery will follow, then ur lyrics will come smoother.

Keep elevatin.