Razorblade - Vomit (revised)

[Razorblade]

Replied to Y G B Youngbugzy, Nujeruz and Bottle B

I re-recorded the track so have another look at it and tell me what you think

 

[Sith Angel]

I love that FX on your voice at the start but your accent stands out to mush on it.
Lyrics was tite but I think your flow could have more emotion in it.
cuz I find it goes in one ear out the other if you know what I mean?

I whole I like this track. I think it sounds better than the other track.
Keep 'em coming man.

Holla back on my MOB track if you haven't all ready

 

[Razorblade]

Thanks for the feedback

Im thinking of recording this track for a demo so I'll take all that in. I know what you mean by the emotion - its wierd, it never comes out how I want it to but I keep at it.

I responded to the MOB track - its hot :thumb:

 

[Ant]

I don't know how much this has changed from the og but man, this track seemed alot better to me. It's hot. I could tell what you said 99% of the time. You spit this much better. I love the beat. That effect you use on ya voice is ill to. I love this man.

I'm listening again...

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

yea the effx are tight,What did you use? this one does sound better..
keep doing ya thing man..I want to hear some more.
good lob.
~1~

 

[Mr Marz]

lovin the beat and the effects. you flow well to this beat, just at some points i can make out some words.

 

[Razorblade]

Thanks guys: I really appreciate all this positive feedback!
And to answer Y G B's question: I use Cool Edit Pro 2.0 to record and it comes with loads of effects so I just altered the pitch and added a slight echo. I'm glad you liked it.
The reason I kept my own voice as well as the FXed one was because I was afraid that people wouldnt be able to understand what I was sayin if it was just the FX working. Better safe than sorry.
Again, I'm glad you all liked it. It means alot.