Razorblade - Phat Ladiez

[Razorblade]

Hey,
I've been gone along time, wrapping up my university course and now that that's out of my way I can get back to what I love the most.
This is a song I recorded a few months ago called "Phat Ladiez", a tale of caution to all those venemous vixens I think you'll all relate to it

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/razorblade_music.htm
It's top of the listings there. Enjoy.

I spent a few hours today replying to as many drops as I could since I been away so if you pick any two you'll be likely to find me.
Peace.

 

[Zom-B]

I listened to the song.

To begin with I should say, this is not my kind of song. So I am NOT a good source for feedback. But since u wanted me to peep it, I did.

I feel you could use some better equipment, basically thats what I feel is holding you down! I can't judge on the lyrical content because im not in to these topics but U got a good flow and okay to good delivery. The lack of soundquality, due to equipment issues, might be the reason I feel the flow n delivery aint better than this. Also the fact that this is not my style.

I cant say much other than that cuz u would probably know better than me on this area. But I can tell u this, if u had chosen a deeper concept or something like that. I could definitely have given u better feedback and I would probably like the song.

But Don't put no weight on this, There are lot of people who like this kinda shit, but im just not one of them.

Hopefully u will find someone else in here who can give u better feedback

 

[Ant]

I've heard this beat before, didn't really like it, but it's ok, I guess.

It's an alright story... like you say very easy to relate too. Your flow has is improved, you ain't doing that pack to many words in a bar thing as much, or to the degree that you used too. Dunno about the quality... your sound quality always sounded nice to me... on this particular track, though, I think you should turn the vocals up abit.

Nice to see you back dropping here razor, keep it up. :thumb:

 

[Sith Angel]

I've rapped on this beat before, nice choice.
You have improved with your style but your accent is real strong so I think you need to watch how you say things. trust me, I've been there myself.
In whole it's a real nice track, I'm feeling the theme and feel of the track.

keep it up bro. oh and yeah, it's good to have you dropping here again.

Pz

 

[Bigg Limn]

Never felt this beat really. Flow is solid, vocals need 2 be upped a bit, hard 2 make out the lyrics with the vocals that low. Quality sounds aiight...a bit like mine lol. From the lyrics I can make out, they seem pretty basic. Should ad some adlibs/backing vocals to fill out the verse more. Flow gets real jumbled when U try 2 switch it up fast. Songs aiight, work on them fine details. Keep elevatin.

Peace

 

[Razorblade]

Thanks man
Appreciate it

 

[Razorblade]

Just fixed the levels
I never noticed it myself but I can really notice the improvement now.
Thanks for the feedback Zom-B, Ant, Phoenix and Limn.
I'd appreciate any more from anyone.

 

[Lok]

I like the beat, it's melodic/original & not just lopped over & over. I like the use of the hook as well.
As for the lyrics, they are kinda low, but it's not that bad. I like the flow & the story telling. Definitely worth a listen, keep up the good work.

 

[Razorblade]

Any more?

 

[Hussein Da Don]

I like the beat...I was feelin the song,,,u had a nice to this homeboy....and the chorus is catchy as hell

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

i like the beat actually , ur flow is okay but nuthin amazing,
the accent didnt bother me that much actually , sum words
mumbled in here and there ,but overall steady flow , so
all i can say its an okay song but not a real eye catcher,
keep em comin , pz