Razorblade - Cowards

[Razorblade]

Replied to Deliquint - The Future and Crittaz - Our Love Is So Real among others...


Cowards - Lo-Fi
Cowards - Hi-Fi

Or the first song on my Music Page.

All feedback's appreciated.

 

[Lil KaMiKaZe]

first of all,nice intro and nice beat...
first verse : i felt like the voice was a bit too loud but i think it's the "quality",anyway
the flow is O.K but i feel like sometimes it's a bit forced

i like the flow you got in the hook,the second verse : i think it's better than the first verse,i feel more the flow and the lyrics then in the first verse

the third verse : it's O.K but not better than the second


overall : the song is O.K but i don't know what but it miss something lol,that's what i feel when i'm listenin'
but i think it just need some works,you gon' improve each songs...

i will listen to yo' other songs for sure...

 

[Delinquint]

Very nice intro, very nice beat. I like all three verses but I'm gonna have to agree with kamikaze, your 2nd verse i think was your best. Chorus was nice too. I think the quality was also fine through out the whole song. Keep droppin.

 

[Razorblade]

Thanks guys, appreciate the honesty.

 

[Simon]

Hey buddy,

Intro: Didnt like it myself, think its been done alot, just my opinion.
Beat: Love this sample, beats really nice.
Verses: Flow was very nice again mate, accent on point as well. Lyrics were nice in the context of the song.
Hook: Hook was nice, i know it must be hard to make it stand out becuase the beats doesnt switch up.

Overall: A Solid track mate, good flow and a nice beat. Not sure about the topic, but overall a nice track.

 

[Razorblade]

Thanks Si, as always.
I love DJ Emdee's beats but, like you say, they never really switch up for the hook. Another problem I had was how loud this sample is, it really over-powers the dumline. I was worried because my vocals sound really loud to me but if I reduced the beat volume at all I'd lose the drum line and so everything else on the track.

 

[alkaholik_151]

nice track man.......its on the same level as ur others....like i said u have an original style & that accent adds alot to ur music........peace