PhoeniX CrookedCross - Lyrical Attack Part 2 (The WildWest)

#1
I did this track a while ago.
& as I haven't dropped anything new here for a while I thought I would drop this one.

I did Lyrical Attack Part 1 back in '98. So I thought it was about time I did a second one.
It's a str8 diss track to people in the entertainment world.
A few well known names. But I think people from the UK will feel this one more.

So Holla back.

http://www.soundclick.com/phoenixcrookedcross

Plus I got a load of new tracks almost ready.
So bookmark my soundclick page and keep checking it for more fire.
 
#3
first of all thx for checking my track. second.. this beat is fire!!
at the beginning i noticed a couple of lines where you tried to fit too many words into one bar. it got better towards the middle of the verse. not feelin the chorus too much. second verse is tight too. there are some points where i cant understand what you are saying. but it was only once or twice. its tight man. there are definitely some points that i think can be fixed up to make it a bit better but overall its a good drop.
 

Ant

New Member
#4
Always loved this beat, that Em and Dre track is very dope, loved that hook too. :cool:

Verses are ruthless as fuck lol, come to expect this type of stuff from you. Love some of the flow on the second verse, and you saying some real real shit there.

I definately like this track, not as polished or as professional sounding as some of your previous things, but it's still got some dopeness there. Keep it up man, good to see you still goin at it. I look forward to hearing some of your future drops.
 
#7
to be honest I'm not really feeling it , don't like the beat ...

moments alone is fucking hot btw and hidden tears & what if too !
holla at me next time you're online!
 

Bigg Limn

Well-Known Member
Staff member
#8
haha whassup dawg? Hows shit been?

Hells yeah...good meets bad haha this beats sicc. Flow solid as usual...enunciation was a bit more meshed on this one...maybe cuz of the harder beat? Iunno its a bit harder for me 2 understand this 1...maybe Im jus retarded. haha U kept the hook fuck yah. lmao @ special olympics. pretty good lines on this. Good track overall keep that shit up. Get @ me, we need 2 do some shit - that shits long overdue.

pz
 
#10
ha , finally sum new shit from the big dawg in England,
the beat is hot ofcourse :eek: , the flow comes in nicely , ha
song starts off with ur typical voice pitching , cool , then ur
flow is just pretty much flawless , the chorus fits the song,
good quality track overall once again , good drop , pz


ps , wutever happend to that collabo we did :eek:
 

ygB

New Member
#13
Dope shit homie,I use to bang the OG..you did a good job flipping it.kool sound Q aswell man.good looking on droppin by one my pages also..I got word homie ..good looking..anyway, your punches were kool too. im listening for second time now..Fuck homie you sick with it..good stuff.
your boy back on the block so holla holla homie.
~bugzy~
 

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