opinion on my 1st beat

[restivo]

http://s26.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2F5LFDWFKHLTA24JQWI67V6446

its not close to done yet, havent added a beat change for the chorus or anything etc. but what are some opinions on it so far?

 

[Pain Of Depth]

well the guitars ( I think ? ) are nice , but the drums sound too techno , get other drum sounds .. & it doesn't sound like u used a drum pattern either ? just put some drum sounds everywhere so it had a rhytm lol

keep working on it tho' ... & check www.todaysbeats.com , check out some of the free tutorials & they'll show u immediately where the snares should be , where the kicks should be etc ..

pz

 

[restivo]

haha thanks forthe post. yeah its my 1st one so it still needs work adn i was already thinking about changing the drums lol. thanks for the site. ill take your advice. :thumb:

 

[Pain Of Depth]

np , what I forgot to ask , do u use fruity loops? I think so ...