no hope full song w/thug poetry beat

[Mr Marz]

this isnt really finished, but here is the full song no hope i posted 1 verse of. feedback appreciated, and any tips on fixing the quality of the vocals.
http://s30.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0KTCHMOQY1CBH3SRW4FT0LX6VR

EDIT: moved the vocals over to the right more... also fixed the chorus to what i meant 4 it to sound like. still some work to do, but this 1 def sounds better.
http://s35.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0N7JZEAZHJ0GW1B8H1L4WMN6J3

 

[Sith Angel]

Alright, it's downloading now.
yeah that beat is a banger.
first, I like your style and flow. Your lyrics are dame sharp.
as the track is now, it's not bad.

To improve it, I would say you need to centre the main vocals cuz there more to the left than the right. I would redo the hook. cuz the quality sounds crappy.
yeah, it's not bad. just centre the vocals.

When it's finished you'll have a hot track.

Props to you man.

Holla back on my drop
http://www.2pacboard.com/forum/thread127426.html

 

[Ant]

Hot beat, first off, good choice. Like Sith said, vocals seem to be over at the left abit, you want them right down the middle, maybe up the quality too.

Apart from that it's quite a hot drop, lyrics are nice, rhyme schemes I like. Flow is constant. It's a nice track. :thumb:

 

[Advocate]

hard beat to flow on, its a different type of beat, im kinda feeling it, not my style though, your energy dies down after the first little while, but i think the calmer style works better with the beat, your pretty lyrical, but it feels like some of the things you are saying you say just because they rhyme, im really feeling the last half of the first verse, not the first so much, the chorus is kind of hard to hear, sounds hot from what i can hear though, not feeling the second verse too much, a little too gangsta for my net tastes, but it gets better really quickly, right around 2:36 i can barely hear whats going on, feeling the last verse, the lyrics and the delievery, its my favourite on the song, sets the bar

good track man, while i reread what i wrote it seems a little harsh but the two main things i am going to criticize is how the volume is constantly going down withe chorus, and not feeling the second verse

keep it up and i hope you guys (Or guy) drop here more

Peace
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[Mr Marz]

edited with better quality version at the top ^^^^^

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

yea ive alwaya like this beat, i done a drop it aswell..lol..

your flow was good,sound q could be better tho, but overall its a good joint, good punches, you rode the beat well.
tight jam homie.
~1~
ygB
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/ygbyoungbugzy.htm

 

[Razorblade]

I like the beat and your flow seems consisitent but the levels sound too low; I cant really make out what you're saying.
I'll look out for more stuff from you.
Keep droppin'.