-- NEW SHIT -- Advocate feat. Michiko - Whenever He Goes

Yes, Advocate.

That girl you got singing has some talent right there.

Your rhymes are pretty nice too, lyrics are sick, flow ranges from a little rough to very sick in parts. Beat is nice, you give off a positive vibe, I like that.

Keep it up.
 
i love the lyrics, but the beat needs a little something extra... an extra instrument somewhere maybe? still a good beat though.
8/10 and repped
 
parts of it could be fixed/extra somethin', but keep that girl on there.....was feelin' her
 
you shoulda had that girl singing a bit more...only one hook, she needed more...the beat needs a little something and your flow got rough in some places and good in the others...imma about to put up a track with one of my singers from the 'burgh, peep that shit, its called will u be...holla
 
you shoulda had that girl singing a bit more...only one hook, she needed more...the beat needs a little something and your flow got rough in some places and good in the others...imma about to put up a track with one of my singers from the 'burgh, peep that shit, its called will u be...holla
 
Beats real nice, I like that guitar. Flows a bit sloppy...need 2 come REAL smooth on this typa track, any imperfections are really gunna show. Overall tho its pretty solid, slips a bit @ like 0:45 or somethin, but overall its pretty solid...jus sloppy on the enunciation side. Hooks pretty nice...altho I always love chicks on a hook especially this typa track. Shoulda had more than jus 1 track on her tho, and U 2. Need some shit in there 2 harmonize and emphasize a lil bit at least. 2nd verse starts off pretty bad, but gets back on track after a few bars, gets real smooth in the beginning. Overall lyrics r pretty nice, know how U feelin. Pretty coo track overall...jus fix up that flow and itll be bangin 4 real. Keep elevatin.

pz ez
 
Whoa I love that beat! Nice flow. Real nice flow. Okay lyrics. Michiko has a beautiful voice. Flow gets a bit off but remains on an average nice. Like the topic and subject and topic of the song. Feel it. Michiko should have had more to sing. Like go over the chorus twice.

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