Neva Stop

[JRubb]

replied to limn and that street sweepa song

droppin a slow type song, i need more criticism on my verse more than anything but critiqueing(?) the whole song is fine, im on the second verse

Neva Stop
http://www.soundclick.com/2deepgrs

v1 jm
v2 jrubb
v3 pdox
v4 nino (dont need to critique)

hook bree and emma lee

ps if you listen to any other tracks on there feel free to comment anything about em...

thanks

 

[JRubb]

replied to limn and that street sweepa song

droppin a slow type song, i need more criticism on my verse more than anything but critiqueing(?) the whole song is fine, im on the second verse

Neva Stop
http://www.soundclick.com/2deepgrs

v1 jm
v2 jrubb
v3 pdox
v4 nino (dont need to critique)

hook bree and emma lee

ps if you listen to any other tracks on there feel free to comment anything about em...

thanks

 

[True Thugz]

Yeah I liked your verse. It was solid, delivery was good.
Lyrikz were ok, didn't have to amazing, just right for the subject matter. You would be the first pick and then the first dude for the better verse imo.

 

[Shot 21]

Nice intro. Not very original. Love that beat! JM got good flow and nice voice. Bree and Emma Lee got good voices but the way they're recorded ruins it (or is that just me?)

YOU:
Oh you got a sicc flow. Great lyrics for the song mood. Dude your verse was short but fuckin sweet! If I was a girl you would have melted my heart lol.

The third guy got a familiar voice but nice flow. Lyrics not brilliant but still pretty sicc. Like the 4th one as well. Voice perfect for the song. Sicc.

Overall this is a BRILLIANT track and I will be burning it if thats okay with you. The verses could have been longer though.

 

[Shot 21]

Nice intro. Not very original. Love that beat! JM got good flow and nice voice. Bree and Emma Lee got good voices but the way they're recorded ruins it (or is that just me?)

YOU:
Oh you got a sicc flow. Great lyrics for the song mood. Dude your verse was short but fuckin sweet! If I was a girl you would have melted my heart lol.

The third guy got a familiar voice but nice flow. Lyrics not brilliant but still pretty sicc. Like the 4th one as well. Voice perfect for the song. Sicc.

Overall this is a BRILLIANT track and I will be burning it if thats okay with you. The verses could have been longer though.

 

[Shot 21]

Nice intro. Not very original. Love that beat! JM got good flow and nice voice. Bree and Emma Lee got good voices but the way they're recorded ruins it (or is that just me?)

YOU:
Oh you got a sicc flow. Great lyrics for the song mood. Dude your verse was short but fuckin sweet! If I was a girl you would have melted my heart lol.

The third guy got a familiar voice but nice flow. Lyrics not brilliant but still pretty sicc. Like the 4th one as well. Voice perfect for the song. Sicc.

Overall this is a BRILLIANT track and I will be burning it if thats okay with you. The verses could have been longer though.

 

[Shot 21]

No I changed my mind, I aint gonna burn this track. I want you to send me a copy of that mixtape (I take it all them songs on your soundclick page make it a mixtape). I live in England but Im sure we can work something out?

 

[Shot 21]

No I changed my mind, I aint gonna burn this track. I want you to send me a copy of that mixtape (I take it all them songs on your soundclick page make it a mixtape). I live in England but Im sure we can work something out?

 

[JRubb]

thanks for the feedback i really appreciate it my cd burner is fucked up right now but im getting it fixed later this week, I can send you something through the mail if ya want, the more it gets around the better, i got another soundclick site if you wanna listen to more music (like 70 songs). you can download any music you want of ours, thats why we put up the free mp3s, hit me up with your address... ill hook you up, thanks again, pz

 

[Hymnz]

i like this... repped.

 

[ApacalypseNow]

great lyrics

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beats real nice. Jrubb-pretty nice flow, lil sloppy at some parts Some nice lines in it. Overall a good verse and a good way 2 open the track. Hooks OK, timing is a bit off. JM-flows a lil choppier...not diggin that delivery 4 this beat, its 2 hard - need 2 be smoother. Lyrics r str8. Pdox-dont like ur voice. Flow pretty solid...a few ok lines but didnt like the way u ended it. Overall a decent track, but needs some fine tuning. Keep elevating.

pz

 

[cdad-d]

it's decent, but like limn said it could use some finishin' polishes......some of the delivery slips at times, but other than that it's better than some of the shit I've heard, but keep it up...not bad

 

[bigCASH]

i didn't really like the beat...but for the most part the lyrics were ok, flow and delivery was shakey at times like some one else said...but it was good