My Poem:My Tortured Soul, Opinions please

[mechman]

nice :thumb:

 

[Jibster]

I froze your tears and made a dagger
And stabbed it in my cock forever
It stays there like Excalibur
Are you my Arthur?
Say you are

Take this cool, dark, steel-ed blade
Steal it
Sheath it in your lake
I'd drown with you to be together
Must you breathe?
'Cos I need heaven

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