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the other thread i made got closed cuz i missed the rules but here goes:



Y G B youngbugzy said in the other post:


The beat is sick, your flow is on point,you ride the beat well,
the q is also str8,overall joint is good to me.
holla
~1~




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^^that was tha first feedback, more appreciated.
 
the bass on the track is nice...my feet are on my sub right now...and its shaking up my legs... :D Beat is nice...flow is mostly on point, slipped once or twice i think, or maybe its me...chorus is good...would be better with a lil more vocal presence
louder with somereverbed shit or something...meh might not be true...thats what i think :P
Good job keep it up
 
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right on Bottle B, i made it a point not to do too many adlibs so i drastically reduced that and relied on my one track spit basically. makes for a more smooth listen and it sounds pretty clean that way.

keep ya ears open cuz i'ma keep doin this.

peace

-Nujeruz

p.s. u kno d.chesron? i made a track with him a long time ago, tell him to holla at me.
 
yeah the beat is a banger, I would love to rip this.
I like your style, you got a nice raw sound to you.
Lyrics are sharp as hell.
You flow sounds a little sloppy but that will become titer over time.
Over all, I think it was dame hot track.

Keep 'em coming man.
Holla back on my drop MOB
 

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