My Kadafi tribute

Nut

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#1
Give some feedback plz !!

Still Rizin on

Yaki
the nobody can copy
nobody can stop me
no cop can drop me
never sloppy
Kadafi
this goes out to you
due to
the fact you stayed true
people still miss
and reminisce
wondering how it ever came to this
without you it isn’t the same
you were able to change the game
and you didn’t die in vain
ppl will always remember your name
your not the caus
of the separation of the outlawz
if you were here the outlawz would maybe
still be together
forever
the beef with Fatal
would never be able
to occur
that’s 4 sure
caus he was your man
and you would have a plan
to get all back together rappin
paper stackin
the Jerzey Mob
wouldn’t have to apply 4 a job
nor finding some1 to rob
they would’ve been on the frontline
with all the souljaz following behind
you’re the only one
who could take the stance to be the Don
through the years
there’ve been shed many tears
many fake rumors about Rowdy accidentally shooting you in the eye
many knew it was a lie
then your causin Rah
Dib told the story about how you died
it ain’t even funny
you got killed over some fucking money
you had your vest around your chest
but that couldn’t protect the rest
ain’t no vest 4 your head
that’s why you dead
murdered in cold
you were only 19 years old
although you had witnessed many shit unfold
it’s true, the good die young
though you did shit that not every1
would’ve done
everybody remembers
you were laid cocked back like a hammer
nobody could sing the way you sung
your style
was laid back but still wild
must have been hard growin up as a child
father in jail
no bail
was you supposed to fail
you stayed strong
and held on
but you know shit goes on
and we still mourn

Chorus: [2x]

a dedication to Yak
who put it down 4 Pac
pouring out liquor
4 this worldwide mob figga
he would’ve been bigga
if his killa
never pulled that trigga
Yafeu Akiyele
F.U.L.A
even though your gone
you’re still rizing and living on
in spirit through a song

who do u believe in
you believed in Allah
he made u a star
shinin bright like daylight
pac came to you
when he wanted more rappers in the crew
first K-Dogg, Big Malcolm, Mutah
and Young Hollywood
it was all good
Young Gunz, Thoro Headz and after that Dramacydal
soon followed the revival
Fatal n Felony
the same melody
you spitted str8 fire
nobody wanted you to retire
you had a gift
that not many ppl are blessed with
2 bad nowadays you get taken off songs
caus that’s wrong
still can’t believe you gone
I wish you were here
caus no rapper can come near
you, comin up outta Montclair
you didn’t live in fear
still must’ve been hard livin out there
you knew pac since you were a kid
he took you under his wing
show the world that you could sing
your flow
was like wow
rapping fast
not slow mo
one of the best outlaw
no1 is that good by far
you spitted words
about Jerzey
how murder’s a curse
many ppl were hurt
by you laying in the dirt
shit is absurd
2 bad you peeps got beef
with Napoleon’s family
hopin they can work everything out
so we can all enjoy
and try to build up
everything that got destroyed
try to enjoy the legacy
late 2004, you got your own CD
Son Rize volume 1
maybe there will be a volume 2
it’s 2 good 2 be true
but it is
even your kids
are on it
at the top lyrical
if you listen to Rizz
spittin your letter
to your unborn
it couldn’t be better
and I’m just showin my appreciation
in the form of this dedication

Chorus [2x]

(I wrote it on Jerzey Mob's 'My Life' beat/instrumental)
 

Nut

New Member
#16
Robbo1984 said:
No offence, but I didn't like it. You wanted feedback, so i'm giving mine, nice try though.
That's alright, tnx 4 the feedback :thumb:

I've had more negative feedback so it's all good, some like it, some think it's wack.
 
#17
Nut said:
That's alright, tnx 4 the feedback :thumb:

I've had more negative feedback so it's all good, some like it, some think it's wack.

Nah, thats wrong. If people don't like it, then they don't like it. It's not wack, so don't worry about what others think. Its wack in there eyes, but in someone elses eyes, its good. But don't let it stop you from writing. Evey artist out there has shit songs, but in others eyes. Its good. But yeh, keep writing man :thumb:. The good thing is that, by the look of it, you ain't letting negative shit bother you, which is good, in my eyes.

Oh yeh! And don't let negative feedback stop you from posting them, because when you've got more. Post them up, i'm interested in hearing more :thumb:
 
#20
Robbo1984 said:
Nah, thats wrong. If people don't like it, then they don't like it. It's not wack, so don't worry about what others think. Its wack in there eyes, but in someone elses eyes, its good. But don't let it stop you from writing. Evey artist out there has shit songs, but in others eyes. Its good. But yeh, keep writing man :thumb:. The good thing is that, by the look of it, you ain't letting negative shit bother you, which is good, in my eyes.

Oh yeh! And don't let negative feedback stop you from posting them, because when you've got more. Post them up, i'm interested in hearing more :thumb:
U r absolutely right :)
Nut dope lyrics ;) keep doin u r things man ;)
Can't Stop Won't Stop !!!
P.S. Please Re up if u can
 

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