MOB feat Xero & Izzy White

Bigg Limn

Bigg Limn

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#2
#2
Beats aiight...pretty simple, but nice guitar chops. Crooked flow is pretty solid, a bit of slippage towards the end. Qualitys pretty crunchy tho =\ Izzy, hook is real nice. Xero flow is on point , hard 2 understand some of the lyrics tho - rhymes is a bit simple from what I heard. Izzy commin in real nice, nice quick verse but U brought heat on it.

Pretty decent track, Crooked ur qualitys the only real downfall tho =\
 
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Delinquint

New Member
#4
#4
I'm definitly feeling this track, and you should definitly put this on your album.

CrookedCross -- Nice delivery, flow was real nice. It did sound like you started to slip up towards the end of the first verse like limn said but its not real noticable. Lyrics were nice on both verses.

Xero -- Came with a lot of energy, when he came on it just hyped me up more for the track. Real nice flow and delivery but like limn said some parts you couldn't tell what was said, but a nice drop overall.

Izzy White -- The chorus was real nice, i was feeling that a lot. Verse was short but very sweet. Flow, Delivery, lyrics were all on point.

This was a nice drop and I love the order of everyone cuz you build it up, then xero comes on to build it up more and then Izzy kills it and you come back on and kill it even more. The only downfall to it was the quality could have been better but its not too bad that it ruins the track or anything...overall 8.5/10

**EDIT** I forgot to mention that I really like the beat and the guitar riffs are real nice.
 
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Razorblade

New Member
#6
#6
Verse 1 -Your lyrics are tight - real hardcore. Not usually my thing but I like it. Delivery, presence and flow are all good. U work the beat well.

Hook - Love that.:thumb:

Verse 2 - Love Xero's voice. His lyrics are tight too; love how he delivers as if he's talking to PCC - gives the song a whole different level. Damn good :thumb:

Verse 4 - Oh shit! Love that line about being raised by women! Thats hot!

Love this track
Its hard - the beat matches everyting so well. Good lookin out!
Give me a free download! :p

Return the favour :thumb:
 
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Y G B youngbugzy

New Member
#7
#7
IM feeling this BIG TIME!
ya man this is a heater..I hope it goes on ur album,
I think your flow was st8,as well as ur homies.
fuck homie, ur voices sound really good togather..
hook is dope,really catchy.
this is the dopest trac i heard off this forum by far.
the q isnt all that bad either..its sounds as goos as some mix cd's out ther, but ya, for ur cd you gone have to clean up the cracks,
really easy tho..holla at ya boy.
~1~
 
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Ant

New Member
#10
#10
This is a class track. I didn't realise it at first but it grew on me definately. I didn't think it was so hot when I listened, but when I was at work, it just kept going through my head, so I listened again and it's hot, no doubt.

I like your bit best crooked, but all of it is nice. Keep up the good work. As has been said, only downfall is sound quality.

Hopefully I can get some shit up soon. Had very little time recording/writing recently. I need to switch up my priorities. So, jus try to return the favour when I sort myself out haha. :)
 
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Nujeruz

New Member
#12
#12
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sup,

when i critique i usually jus spill my thoughts as the song plays, off the bat the intro told me this beat was goin to be sick, the laugh at the begininnin sound like tupac. the mix sounds like it still needs more work, bass is too high, the first rapper pretty sick, feelin it, nice chorus yo i'm feelin the singin and its style.....gyeah, this is some music. nice beat, the beat is good. not feelin the second rapper as much as the first but he okay. well not my style tho so gyea. third rapper picks it up a little but still not as good as the first in my opinion......chorus still feelin it, i wish i had a sick chorus like that on my songs. i figure phoenix laughs like pac usually before his verse, but he tha illest rapper so i'm feelin his raps. ight man sick beat, try to keep up with pheonix level, he doin it tight.

-Nujeruz
 
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