Messing around with ABC's

Ryan2318

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Sep 11, 2004
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Just starting messing around to expand my vocabulary and the way i think when writting so i decided to do abcs. The first is a verse that alternates going thru abcs every other verse till i get to z, then a couple verses to finish it off and then a chorus that is abc all the way thru.

Then the second thing is probably way too complex for anyone here to understand but i can explain it and it does actually say something(you just need a dictionary for words with multiple connotations). Its just hard to understand because I didn't allow myself to mess up the abc order at all. In the first thing I allowed myself to put in a few words like "on, to, my, own, etc." but in this it is strictly abc.

Let me know what you think. I was fun and hard at the same time to do this.

1. Already been cautious damn,
Well most of my life,
Early forces gave hell,
Gave into fighting the strife,
I just kept laughing,
At unlaughable matters
Meant not to oppose my parents,
But they kept causin’ disasters
"Quit reading stupid texts"
“Get back to your chores”
“U’re vigor is wanin”
“Quit finding things to explore”
“Xpress your own zone”
In other known ways”
“We don’t have enough money
To put you though school today”

Arguably,
The best caption for dreading evil,
Is: fiery God hatin’ people,
Illnesses just to keep us legal,
Mother nature opposing all penal acts,
Quite rightful suicidal tacts,
Unearthing various so-called wacks,
Xcommunicating your pope,
Cause you can’t cope with his zealous past,
Stop being cowards and act


2. Abstract brethren can’t distinguish even from
Gun-holding irrational jackals kindly lacking mentally,
Naturally occurring principles, quite regularly solicited
To uneven vigilantes who xpress yielding zeal,
And better comrades, dreading every fuckin
Good-headed indignant, judging, keying laughable matters,
Notoriously open pleading quiet resolutions, sovergnly
To unearth violence with xtreme yelling zeal.
 
its dope that u stayed within a rigid structure like that, but I found your structure was too rigid and the lyrics were difficult to read through. Although, there was some sickness in there for sure and for the most part, it was just too complex to really get into. Props on taking it to a new level though, keep that up and you'll be writin circles around ppl
 

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