mars ft z and ali - life is over

[Mr Marz]

a tribute myself and two of my good friends did for a homie of mine who committed suicide about 2 years ago. i rap first and last. one of my friends does the verse in the middle and another does the hook.
one thing i think im going to change is how the voices sound but please let me know ur opinion.

mars ft z and ali - life is over

lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5163408&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5163408&q=hi


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[SkitzoFreniak]

first off , too bad ur mic quality isnt clear and really disturbing since u hear it throughout the song , but anyway the beat fits the whole
vibe and concept of the song , good choice on that , ur flow
is tight , but at times seem to go too fast for the beat and
seems like slipping a little , but u got good confidence on the mic,
it shows , chorus is real nice , nice singin'
second verse less energy but more on point , i liked it,
the third verse i liked better then ur first verse , more natural

as far as lyrics , i feel ya , no bad points there , so overall
this is a good track man , just the first verse could use a lil'
touching up and ofcourse the quality of the vocals

ps. its been a long a@% time that i been here , good to see
yall holding it down here still , keep up the good work Limn and others

pz

 

[alkaholik_151]

i agree with skitzo about the mic quality.....also, the songs a little gloomy to me.....but that's just cuz its not my style of song. ur delivery is definately on point though so im sure you can come up with some pretty tight tracks if you get a better mic........1

 

[WayCide-Ridah]

tight tracc mayne...just think how tight the song would be if done wit a better mic or in an actual studio

flow was on point, this song reminds me of some ol school type hip hop...second verse was just as good, i couldn't find any bad points...third verse, another nice one, just seems a good way to end the song...just the way it came on...

hook was tight, i liked whoever it was singing...shit was tight

overall i'd give it a 7/10....only cuz the mic was shitty tho...one