Malek - Show Me

[malek_5]

Ok, followed the rules this time. My reviews are here.

d/l:
http://rapidshare.de/files/1634850/01-_Malek___Jack_Diesel_-_Show_Me.mp3.html
OR
http://myshare.com/malek5

This is the first track I made with this guy, looking for all kinds of feedback. He had a couple beats going and I picked this one. Lyrics are up on the myshare site.


reviews:
http://www.2pacboard.com/forum/showthread.php?p=196504#post196504
http://www.2pacboard.com/forum/showthread.php?p=194775#post194775

 

[jeremy_]

can you put this on a soundclick.com account? 7mb will take ages on my 56k.

 

[Bigg Limn]

First off - that myshare link doesn't work.

Not feelin the beat 2 much, too elevatorish - but that organ is nice lol. When U come in it just sounds like an intro. Vocals sound clear, but need 2 be a bit louder. Hook sounds pretty nice. Gap betwee the 2nd verse/hook needs 2 be filled. Flow is solid on this, delivery is smooth on the beat. Need some more production work though, as well as stronger lyrics. Not a bad track, just needs more touch-ups to make it sound like a solid complete song. Keep elevatin.

Peace

 

[imported_MAKaveli_10]

Damn I thought the vocals were way too low. I couldn't hear shit but maybe thats me. The beat was okay, but I think it needs to be changed because a lot better could be done. The flow was nice and they rhymes were okay but they need some work. Also the chrous was nice. Needs some work but it was okay.

 

[Hussein Da Don]

Shit was too low for me homeboy....But it was nice.....beat was average, ya flow was good....good shit cuz