(lw) Dark Spirit -vs- Wcsoul

aight aight....here we go






round one, get up my niggaz, cause its t-dot vs. michigan/
pay attention dark_spirit, cause i wont be doing this again/
plug my mic in and get reloaded/
and wish i learned how to control it/
cause my lyricalz are full of lead, cant you tell?/
dont make shattered_dreams tell you how she fell*/
you can try, but you're just another count in my battles score/
i'll throw it all at you until you'll start crying "please, i aint want no more"/











* nothing personal S. Dreams, strickly business. ;)
 
alright, for what it's worth...
here u go

Tattered skillz don't mesh-shit-why don't u go ahead and be my guest//
can't cope when I rip-you-to-my-best
cuz like grade school examinations I put-you-to-the-test//
Dawg seriously u so 'tight fisted' I thought you had an 'ace up your sleeve'//
so nervous ur beggin me to leave
but like a mother delivering, I be tellin you to 'breathe'//
Did I say ur delivering? shit ur like a fuckin shadow
the way I'm always a step-ahead-of-you//
if ever they honored u, then now ur trashed like tyson
I guess your 'wits-wouldn't-last'//
My Hits-Comin'-Fast, droppin 'antiques' on ay-G
so he can come to 'grips-wit-the-past'//
Your shit's atrocious-dawg I don't know if u noticed
but you got a whole lotta fixin-to-do//
pickin' at you-cuz like 'scared butchers' wit lyrics
the way you got a whole lotta 'chicken-to-do'//
 
alright, for what it's worth...
here u go

Tattered skillz don't mesh-shit-why don't u go ahead and be my guest//
can't cope when I rip-you-to-my-best
cuz like grade school examinations I put-you-to-the-test//
Dawg seriously u so 'tight fisted' I thought you had an 'ace up your sleeve'//
so nervous ur beggin me to leave
but like a mother delivering, I be tellin you to 'breathe'//
Did I say ur delivering? shit ur like a fuckin shadow
the way I'm always a step-ahead-of-you//
if ever they honored u, then now ur trashed like tyson
I guess your 'wits-wouldn't-last'//
My Hits-Comin'-Fast, droppin 'antiques' on ay-G
so he can come to 'grips-wit-the-past'//
Your shit's atrocious-dawg I don't know if u noticed
but you got a whole lotta fixin-to-do//
pickin' at you-cuz like 'scared butchers' wit lyrics
the way you got a whole lotta 'chicken-to-do'//
 
aight ay you had a nice flow and good ryhme construction but i didn't see any punches.that's like the main course.

dark spirit your flow was off and on and a bit choppy but you had a few multi's and about 2 good punches.you delvered more from your verse and the punches what really killed ay.

vote=dark
 

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