Love Of My Life (SoLo's Edit)

[ApacalypseNow]

http://s59.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1RW434BZ8IF6B2LEPCF5T1ONF2

http://rapidshare.de/files/6437620/...adu_-_Love_of_my_Life__SoLo_s_Remix_.mp3.html


made this a few yearz ago, my girlfriend Loves it and so do ppl round my way, just thought i'd share it and see what others think, hoLLa at me wit sum feedback,

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[DJ LV]

great song, i like it

 

[cdad-d]

nice

 

[Hymnz]

cool, repped

 

[JarG]

yep it was ok u r flowin here well i like it !

 

[Advocate]

i think that the production gets in the way of the track, a little more energy/quality over the beat would really effect overall preformance.

so far its sounding pretty good man, your reminding me of busta on the track, i dont know why maybe because of his track with Badu.

lyrics in the first verse are a little played, but flowed nicely.
"dont want to live my life wondering what if" dope emphasis on the words and in following lines. badu is mixed pretty nicely in the track. the two of you sounding pretty nice at the end, except for production difference right.

im feeling how you end the track, keep it up keep it up keep it uppp
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[Diaz]

Sounds pretty good. I think you can be more enthusiastic on your delivery.

 

[ApacalypseNow]

thanks for the feedback, i'm taking all of your opinions seriously, and wiLL focus more on coming stronger with my delivery. Thankz!


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[JRubb]

Beat: I like the beat, its simple easy to get the lyrics across to stand out.

Quality: Sounds pretty shitty, sounds like you need a new mic. You can really tell the difference when the chorus comes in. Maybe a lil more editing in like cool edit would help out a lil?

Lyrics: Lyrics were decent, nothin bad. I cant be much of a critique on lyrics cuz i know mine arent the greatest, lol, im more of a flow guy....

Flow: You slip alot on this song i believe. Some lines seemed forced like you need to slow down and speed up at times. you gotta relaxed flow, can be good and bad at times, sounds decent on this song.

Overall: an average song... 6/10, has a lot of potential though. keep workin

 

[ApacalypseNow]

man u broke it down, thankz 4 tha advice!


anyone kno where i can get a g00d mic for cheap??