There is really no point in telling you its hot, a banger, whatever. I would post here to try to get help if something isn't liked or something is liked and well I will critic the same.
The beat is something I would choose, goes with the song well, very nice. Your flow is unique, really never listened to anything you posted before but I like it, reminds me of E-40 on some occassions but your rode the beat pretty nice. Your hook though, you kind of stuumble over your words, I'd re-record that, it really only happens in your first say of it. Your voice gets a little "squeaky" at times, no big deal though. No lines really stand out its solid song though, you stay on topic throughout and the song is constructed well. Personally I liked the song ending after your done talking, the "Find meaning in this meaningless mess" I really dont like that. I would stop saying anything after your done talking and still let hte beat ride out til like 3:32 or whatever it was, might be saying too much but whatever, it aint bad just that whispering started to annoy me. I'd probably change the song right before it would start to happen. But I liked the song, solid concept and you followed through with it well. Excuse the length of this but I had some time and said why not, I'll check for more shit from you though, Peace.
