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Limn - "Chea"

Ch-ch-ch-ch-Chea!

You flowed pretty dope on this one and I was definitely feeling the song. I never liked that beat a while lot, but that don't mean I won't listen to the song, haha. There were some pretty funny lines in the song as well. The baseball bat one, the gardner one, haha. Good shit.
 
When you drop "you can't rock to my flow" in the second verse, I don't think I would have paused like that, it stops the beat a little too much. Especially for a club track, you have to keep it bouncing. I'd put a shaker or a high hat on the beat too, it sounds too stripped down.
 
yeah...that shit was hot....flow was real nice...lyrics were on point...what more can i say....but it sounded like a freestyle to me
 
Beat is ok, not really my style but it suits you nicely. You got a catchy hook... but i don't wanna sound stupid but what the fuck is "Chea?" I head loads of rappers say it... is it just a variation on "yeah" or what? :confused: Flow is very nice as usual... and this definately wouldn't sound out of place in a club or sumthin', nice nice. Lyrics don't really count for anything in this type of song do they? But, some nice lines put down so yeah, very solid drop. Oh, and I've listened to your Liberation Mixtape, it's a tight release man, keep it up. :thumb:
 
That is one of my favourite beats and I think it works really well with your song. I really like the rhymes in the song. throughout the whole song theyre solid. Your flow is really good on this song and I am really feeling it. This song is awesome. 9 out of 10. Chea Chea Chea
 
Thanks Ant, and yeah it's just a variation of "yeah" lol

Thanks MaK & bigcash 2 - although not sure what U mean by it sounds like a freestyle? I wish I could free this good lol

Peace
 
not really going to comment on the beat since you didn't make it, but i like it, so good selection.

lol @ more "greens then your gardeners have seen"
yeah break in the beat is a bit weird.
talking is ok, but i would prefer longer verses.
some really good punch lines in here.

again not my type of track but you do pretty well.
i prefer that mellow stuff like karma.
 
Yeah I don't like these types of tracks really, but I wanted to show some diversity on the mixtape so a few self-reps/club tracks got thrown on there. Thanks for the comments all, glad U feelin it 4 the most part.

Peace
 
Limn said:
Thanks Ant, and yeah it's just a variation of "yeah" lol

Thanks MaK & bigcash 2 - although not sure what U mean by it sounds like a freestyle? I wish I could free this good lol

Peace
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when i said it sounded like a freestyle...i didn't mean it as an insult...it just sounded that way to me because durind the parts that you were talking it sounded as if there was a bunch of other people in the booth or around you when you were recording it.
 
^^its not hate,its just my opinion. it means nothing to you cuz i dont know you :)

a matter a fact im gonna rep u cuz u didnt try to insult me or call me names,you took it like a man,i like that.
 
I understand it's your opinion, and you're right it doesn't phase me. The only reason I labled it as hate was because you said "you suck." U gave no reasons. I know I don't suck. I'm far from the best, or my peak - but I know I don't suck. If you could tell me why you think I "suck" then I can have something to improve upon. Criticism is always welcomed, whether negative or positive.

Peace
 
^^i know you know that you don't suck or else you wouldn't be doing this.sorry for not giving a reason but here's it. its just the style u know,i usually like more aggression in tracks.not like screaming but you know,some aggression instead of just the same tone throughout the whole track.thats primarily the reason. theres some minor things but its just my opinion out of many others opinions so its really not that important.

like i said,just an opinion,and sometimes harsh opinions make you work harder and better. i got nothing but respect for what you do and wish you the best of luck. maybe my comment was a little harsh,i know i could have worded it differently,but i guess im just used to seeing shit like you suck written everywhere so i just said it.
 
lol s'all good - just for the record I don't like this track much. Was just something I fucked around with when I was blazed. But thanks 4 the feedback, on most tracks I usually try 2 come with a more emotional delivery (dunno if U checked anything else out besides this)

Peace
 
Limn said:
lol s'all good - just for the record I don't like this track much. Was just something I fucked around with when I was blazed. But thanks 4 the feedback, on most tracks I usually try 2 come with a more emotional delivery (dunno if U checked anything else out besides this)

Peace
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no prob man. yea i checked out that track called confessions.that one i thought it was nice,especially since its a dedication to your girlfriend.good job :thumb:
 
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