left up to you, the reader.

[shattered dreams]

i wrote this poem to see how people viewed things differently. i wrote it in one way. please tell me how you viewed it as.

you doubted me
on my ability
to up and leave
and my capability
to never see
true reality
never thought id be
in a mind of utterly
disgust and despair
never thought i wouldn't care
thought i'd always be there
my life with you, I'd share
a perfect pair
but true love is rare
now this i am aware
and life aint fair
it will leave you cold and bare
and this i swear
ill never get caught
in something i once thought
was something, if i sought
it would eventually be brought
love, it only brung pain, so i fought
fought, to keep my heart and love alive
but today is the day, it has arrived
today is the day, they both have died
but i know now, no matter, i will survive
even through times of strive
determination and drive
will keep your love fresh and live
and this is something that i've
always thought to be untrue
but my doubting days are finally through
and now im ready to put all my trust in you.
i love you

 

[jm5471]

and life aint fair
it will leave you cold and bare
and this i swear
ill never get caught
in something i once thought
was something, if i sought
it would eventually be brought


that was my favorite part of it, i liked it cause i can feel it when i read it, i also like the style of writing that u used

 

[~live2tell~]

I thought it was good but I've read better from you. I saw it as a love poem, a dedication to someone you love and how you feel or used to feel about love until you met this person.